OS : Set Fire to the Rain - Page 2

Originally posted by: mistyrains

You are writing, YAY.

Res 😆

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That was some powerful writing Pankti. You should write more, you are so good at it :D

Now coming to the OS-

Arnav should actually say all that you have written so perfectly to Khushi in the show too. It has the intensity, the guilt everything. And how I admire the trembling strength you have given Khushi here. Her character is so admirable. And the kiss though a bit unexpected, was so beautifully written. And you write wonderfully, creating a riot of conflicting emotions, effortlessly.

Lovely OS!:) And I hope, you give us more of your work soon :D

-Aapki Sona 😆

Originally posted by: arisai

That was so lovely and emotional. It really does seem to be exactly how Khushi's feeling at the minute. Doing it all for Arnav's happiness.

And the lyrics of the song fit the mood of the story perfectly. Heck, anything even mildly emotional and you can pretty much guarantee there's an Adele song for it. 😆

But seriously, your vocabulary and imagery was so good and varied and also THERE WERE NO STUPID SPELLING OR GRAMMATICAL MISTAKES (everybody who knows me on here knows how important this is to me 😆).

This was a brilliant start to your IF writing and I hope you continue with more works soon :)

Rafa

Originally posted by: Aveiro

Res

Originally posted by: inspiringstars

Wow, I cant believe I am getting a comment from you, the reason is, your latest FF Tainted, has blew my mind. I love it to bits. And to be getting compliments from you is an honor.

Thanks a lot, it means a lot!!

Originally posted by: minimuffin86

One of my most favorite songs ever!! and you should write more often... seriously!!

Originally posted by: saavan_lover

That was sooo good! *sigh* I hope they dont have a sad ending in the show 😒

That would just break my heart 🥺

Really good job on the OS 😃

Originally posted by: BlueMystique

First OS? Really? But you are so good at it!

Okay missy first things first! I didn't get a pm! >.<

BTW you do read my works right? And comment? Please tell me i did not just rant at a stranger!

Anyway! I love it! Great use of words.

And you made khushi walk away! In your first OS! That takes guts! Kudos to you!

So? Pm? Capiche? 😆

Looking forward to hearing from you!