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Avi64

@Avi64

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

that was beyond sweet! the way you brought out Arnav's emotions... that was sooo beautiful! loved it😊

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Simran

@Sim1234

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

aww that was beautiful! lovely how arnav suddenly relied on khushi and now she is his best friend!

So cute, and thanks for the update😊

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Aarti

@aartipartyy

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

That was so amazing!
I loved the last paragraph so much!!

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ShiningStar18

@ShiningStar18

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Simply beautiful dear.

Really loved it .

Awesome work 🤗

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Fuj

@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

This was beautifulll!

Loved how you've explaineed arnav's lifeee and how u've explained khushi's natureee

Lovedd ittt😃

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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

WHAT THE??? 🤣

I was sooo happy on reserving a post on Iqra's first page and you've already commented before me?? 😲 This is such a What The moment 🤣 And now I'm off to read this OS 😳 and yesss Iqra is an Amazing writer!! Full of ideas but too much of a lazy bum to write them 🤣 Ain't I right, Iqra?? 😆

🤣 I was surprised myself!

I saw the post n rushed to reserve...later I realised I didnt even let Iqra reserve a spot for her own index 😆 That was my What the...moment 😆

Iqra is a lazy bum? Ahem...look whose talking 🤣 Queen of all lazy bums 🤣

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-Grace-

@-Grace-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Thank you so muchhh everyone!

today later on i will reply to each individual comment!

Thanks alot!

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-Grace-

@-Grace-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

😆

Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum
Hey Iqra! Thats ur name i guess...am I right?
Fari has to be of some help!!!!! 😆

That was a beautiful OS
The way u described Arnav...it was touching
His feelings, emotions, everythiing
I dont know what to say about it
I'm speechless
I guess for the 1st time someone has tried to bring out Arnav's emotions n succeeded immensely
I Loved every bit of the OS
Fari's right, u should write more, u r a wonderful writer😃
Cheers!

Yes thats me😆

Awwhh fari told u about me?? that girl😳

and thank you sooo muchhh! im SO glad i was able to impress you and have one more reader on my list hehehe😆

Yeah i really wanted show his exhaustion i mean he went to harvard and all kuch frustration to honi chahiye na😆

And yes i will deff write more

thanks again!

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-Grace-

@-Grace-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: SmileyStar
Res 😃 First page!! Woohoo 😆

*EDITED*

OMG!! That was sooo AWESOMELY written!! I fell in love with it!! Arnav's emotions, his pain and his desire to have a shoulder to lean on sometimes... It was all so brilliant!! 😃 esp love the part when he thinks of his childhood, running with abandon in his small jeans... That was such a cute touch!

Thats it! You make me update ASR Jr, now I'm gonna keep bugging you till you give us such Awesome treats! And you're free these days Anyways so might as well write 😳 Take lessons from Ashum! Ever since she's gotten free she's been on a Roll 😉 Hehehe!

I want more! More! Mooorreee! Do ya hear, missy?? 😆

And when did you write this thingy? I mean, I've been talking to you all day today 🤣

FARIII YAYYY!😉

first of all your super long awsome comments ALWAYS make my day😳 and i read them more than once hehehe

and his childhood, lol saw this kid in the park he was SOO adorable and he laughed which was ultra cute when i twirled him hehe so that was in my mind and i just added that lol

AHAHA dhamki huh?? and im working on a few and you can expect me to post one on Khirad-Ashar wud u like that?😆

haha and i wrote it in the park when i started it (on my phone lol)