falling in love with the shadow

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Guys i have started a new FF ,this is my first work in india forums

Help me dearies to continue the FF and kindly give ur support...

Falling In Love With The Shadow

Prologue:

Love is a beautiful thing to fascinate for those who has not experienced it

Yeah, but

For Khushi, it is literally a pain to last her a lifetime she was warned not to fall in love but she did not hear or should i say destiny did not allow her... devi mayya planned it all...

Today is her wedding day, she will be Khushi Raj Malhotra no more...Khushi ki Ar... the thought made her cry even more ...

She cried on and on till she washed off her heart away from his memories

Looking at herself in the mirror one last time, she cleaned her face which was soaked with tears and retouched her face and put the veil on her again

Her lehenga and the dupatta over her head felt less heavier than her heart, she took each and every careful steps to reach the door where her amma and buaji knocked several times.

She flashed her fake smile again to them...

To her mother and aunt she looked like a perfect bride to be led into the altar for the wedding ceremony ...

At Rm,

Anjali is all worried and choked with tears running down her cheeks on seeing her chottey laying still in his bed ..

So how was it folks was it any worth????

Comments plzzz should i continue...

Index

prologue above

character sketch: pg 2

chapter -1 : The news: pg 3

chapter 2 : Unreachable pg no:6

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Dr.Strange thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yeah its a good start... Hope you do continue soon... i would like to see how you proceed with the story...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice! Im excited for this :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good start. Seems like Khushi is in love with someone else! Do continue!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ooo I am intrigued...

I am going on a whim here to say that this is not khushi's first marriage... Hell I don't think it's Arnav's first marriage either... maybe I am wrong...

I get that Khushi loved another which is why she was upset but whats with our dear boy being in tears? ... Very curious ...hmmm🤓

Great start, dont stop. x
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priyankaa thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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plss continue...it sounds gud...👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great start , do cont dear

why they separated ?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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good start
waiting for the next to know why they are separated
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh my my!!! devi has started writing. what could be better than this. Great start with a suspense.

Full support darling. Go on. waiting for the suspense to get clear and we could see the sun behind these dark clouds.

All the best for later parts.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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An intrigue-filled beginning.
If I were you, I would continue and I would expand on that scene.
Maya

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