ArHi OS: Stargazing - Page 4

i have no words

its soo heart touching. i felt tears on my cheeks while reading their flashbacks.

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OS #2 - Comment # 3 - Time : 00:38

my like button is working again! *does balle balle* finally! Now to the OS dearie in simple words it was very refreshing. I admire the inspiration behind it, the way you connected both the characters through the mother aspect was marvelous! Really I loved this bit.

"Arnav singh raizada wasn't as composed a man as everyone thought him to be. If anyone were to look into his mind, they would see the chaotic stream of thoughts and their intensity, would cripple anyone. So ASR's greatest power wasn't to be in control of the situation, but was to convince everyone that he was in control, even when he felt like crumbling."

it showed us the facade that he is having trouble keeping, the guard which is fading. A superb read, the angst you have show within both of them was fabulous. Khushis flashback wad more tender than Arnavs, it was almost heartbreaking and Arnavs was mischevious and lovely to read, Im glad the iceman can feel the scorching heat.

Splendid!

-Aashifa

Fabulous os. You portray emotions very well

awesome memories and wonderful explanation of their respective internal emotional turmoils..!!And a big thank u for ur promotion wala link now i get to read more of ur stories...!!Yaay..!!

@BlueMystique: Awesum n fantastic OS!!!!😊