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Magicia

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Posted: 13 years ago

OmG I Did Some Mistake😆 In Sending Pm ..Instaed of new Link i send this Link

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CRAZY SUNDARI AND CUTE SHAITAN

i am really angry with my silent readers ..5000 views and only 40 likes ..little comments ..hmm ..hotel mey khana khaya ..without bill chala gaya ..😭 at least tell me what you dont like na ...so that i can improve ..very bad ...ok ..i will better make this members only ...😕... see why i am frustrated when i see so much response to even crap posts .or just Picture posts ..😕..and here i am hardworking ..😳 i love to do for arhi thats alag baath ...😳 phirvee ... little response .makes me confused ..😕..

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he moved towards her taking slow steps ..hesitating for what he is planning to do ..

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He dont wanted to look at her, thinking about the things going to happen , Gosh ..he could feel his body harden and ..

his hands shaken ...khushi felt him standing beside her , but why her body is not slashed yet !she slowly open the eyes ..and sees his hands getting shaken ..

ha ha .Khoon karthey waqth har khooni ka haath kaapthey hi ..

she looked at him ...

he looked at her , then decided to close his eyes and do ..waht he planned , but then ,, its ..really dangerous for her ...

better ask herself to do it , but how can she .

you should do it ..before she could get sting by it ..

he once again hesitated ...

oh god .this waiting for death is really torturous ..she thought in pain ..finally she shouted .,.,

Arnavji Ruka Kyon ... Kar deejiye na ..Jo Apney Socha ,,tha ...Common do it ,,

She cried , shouted and ordered ..

yes ..Now Arnav .. he sata nd instantly , lifted the blouse little up with the tip of the knife and teared it open in a swift movement

Khushi felt the cold ness of metal she closed her eyes tighter she could ...

and then cried

Ammmaa a...

blouse along with the inners tore open in front ...and the honey bee just flew away .. ..Arnav one moment trailed its flight then ..next moment , very much concerned , he asked khsuhi looking at her

Khushi are you ok ...

and he felt his breath stopped 😳

i cant update anymore today ..will update tomarrow please feel free to comment

and like

next part below this ...😃... please tell me how is it ...

and i am palnning to continue it as an FF ..what you guys think ..will u read it it ?? 😆

its just ..about crazy khushi and love stuck Raizada ... any title suggestion ?/

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Magicia

@magicia

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Posted: 13 years ago

blouse along with the inners tore open in front ...and the honey bee just flew away .. ..Arnav one moment trailed its flight then ..next moment , very much concerned , he asked khsuhi looking at her

Khushi are you ok ...

and he felt his breath stopped

Yes he asked her "are you ok ? " but he was sure that moment he gone completely not OK ! ..

He turned almost immediately , the hustle , the hush in which he turned Khushi opened her eyes .. And saw him turning his back '

She and him only at 4 feet distance .. She and her death '

Yes she is seeing her death face to face ..and that moment every control gone out of her and she started to scream '

Bachao ..bacho 'Help me ..Help mee'..

Arnav frustratingly ran his hands in his hair ,

Oh god this silly is making things difficult 'Why is she screaming ..he turned and pounced on her closing her mouth , sprawling his body almost atop her .. ..

Shut Up Khushi 'Shut Up ..

She shook her body trying to get him away from her under him , crushed under his body weight '

She hit her legs up and down . Trying to escape ..He entwined his legs around her lower body making her lay immobile '

Don't move ..Khushi ' I am not going to Rape You '

With his eyes ..Ok .. he assured 'with his eyes ..

And whispered I am not going to rape you

..more to himself , strangling the urges between his legs by pressing hard against her body which is ironically not helping at all

She seems a bit calmed down ..

And he slowly moved his hands which shut her up ..

I want to live ' ..Please don't kill me '.I don't want to die ' please please '..

Again she started to throw tantrums ..

What The '

Here I am worried she misunderstood of me taking advantage and she screaming don't kill me ..a much needed "what the" moment

Dekho Khushi .. Mey Thuhmey Kuch Bhee nahee Karney Waley hoom Ok ..Abhee Chillana Band karo '

Ha Ha ..Ap Kuch Nahee Kar Sakthey ..Ye Duniya Ko Patha Na Chaley Isliye Ap Humey marna Chahthey hi na..Please ..Apko Is Vajah se Humey marney Kee Zarroorath Anhee ..hum ..Kisesee se ..

She swear-ed touching her thought

Hum Kisese Nahee Kahengey ..Ki ..Humara Pathi ko Aisa Kuch problem Hi 'Sachee

He quickly rose from her and Shouted ..

WHAWT !!

Precap :

Again he laughed .. Making her mad ..

Ha ha ..kyun nahee ..sab shadi kar key '

She paused , her face instantly got red , but still in her fighting mood ..

Oh ..I.I don't know that '.. He looked at her naughtily '

So people are getting married .to .do ..such things '...Right ??

For Next part ...

I made this as an FF

May 8 2012

Crazy Sundari and cute shaitan

Chapter 9 Updated on page 15

tomarrow i will not be able to send pms

for everyone ..

so please check my thread

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after the episode

and i made a small video for the update

what happened it update😆

please watch

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;;;;;;;;hey ..i am planning to write it as an FF ;;;;; what You guys think of it ...if you guys like this and want to continue as an FF please like this Post ...

hmm i am planning this a s an FF ..some 25 parts outlines so far ...please ..check the link ..

will complile chapters tomarrow ..

take a look at the banner made by me ...😆

this is the link

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2963473/arhi-crazy-sundari-and-cute-shaitan

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akanshya

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Posted: 13 years ago

yaar u r very bad...

everytine u leave it in between an interesting part...

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binimoti

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Posted: 13 years ago

o what will happen next do i have to buddy you for updates???

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BarunSobtIsMine

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: binimoti
o what will happen next do i have to buddy you for updates???

buddy this id to get Pms

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priya

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Posted: 13 years ago

wow nice part

what will happen nxt interesting

continue soon

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samia19

@samia19

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Posted: 13 years ago

NOOO why have u stop...:((( this part was reallly interesting

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Daspayel

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Posted: 13 years ago

Khoda pahar nikhli madhumakhi
hai re nand kishore : o

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Magicia

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nimishakumar
omg omg omg...!!!
cant wait for ur update..!!
i have to wait til 2mrw..??
GOSH..!!
its too long..!! :P
anyways...tanx for the realy lng update..!! :D
luved it hun..!!
it was fab..!! :D
luv ya hun..!! :D

thank you koee tho mujey samajtha hi ..ha ha ..

if that part i typed first were not deleted😡 then ..

i could have finished it today itself ...😃