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Batool Imran

@nav_bat

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: nareshSV
Ahhh...Batool u made it yet again...loved it carries all the emotions they r feeling for each other...well written...

Thanks alot dear!🤗

And I thought this was my worst piece ever.

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Aparna

@-aparna-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: nav_bat

what the bey
m used to of encouraging u?
Yeah actually m but that doesnt mean i l do jhooti tarif.
And ans. Of ur last question is on fb:D
meri tarah tu bhi sanki hagai padhai kar kar ke:p

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Beautiful!

I dunno why you felt it is not up to what you thought! But for me their feelings were told well..

Thanks for the PM dear!😊

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Thank you so much for the PM, I loved every line, its beautifully written, also, PM me whenever you write something. 😃

Loved it⭐️

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

bloody hell woman one of these day i am going to virtual slap you for insulting your work why do you always underestimate yourself every time i hate when a writer does this loved the os it was well written and beautifully done the emotions was greatly portrayed love that you did both arnav and khushi pov loved how you portrayed how confuse khushi is about her feelings and how she is regrets how arnav also regrets his action loved it thanks for the pm