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.Saraa.

@.Saraa.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

dont call it crappy..its well written

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arshiar8

@arshiar8

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

it was v gud

v touching one ...made me cry...liked it yar continueee

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Ritika

@WiseGirl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

It's not stupid, it's really, really good! I love the way you show Khushi's emotions so flawlessly! I loved it!

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smile1412

@smile1412

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Beautifully written... U hv no idea of your talent as you keep underestimating yourself!

You have the knack to bring out the emotions in such an endearing manner! Pla do continue!! N waiting eagerly for the next update of we r together!!!!!

Cheers!

Sujatha

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

that was good!! loved how you wrote about what they were feeling so accurately!! who knows how its gonna play out!! but i like what you have!

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purplekid

@purplekid

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Beautifully written! Thanks for the pm!

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littlemoi

@littlemoi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Not crappy at all, amazing actually!! I loved it!

Thanks for the pm!!

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MARYAM

@barun_lover

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

beautifull os ...thanx 4 the pm 😊

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Chhaya

@arhi-fan

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

It was nt stupid but smthing written very beautifully. Just loved every bit of it.

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sarra0

@sarra0

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

lovely os, the emotions beautifully written 😊

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