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writers note:

just watched mu post and almost 900 views and just 31 likes and comments

well guys if you read hard work of someone isn't it right to spend a minute to write any comment. appericiate it or criticise it. for me it is very difficult to take time out to write something for you guys but so many veiwers donot have time to atleast hit the like button..m very upset about it.and if the case is like that m not updating it any more m sorry for that

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Part 1 (this is a continuation from my OS: the after math

Links to the previous parts are provided later)

Khushi was back home from hospital fully recovered and was greeted very warmly. She wondered what has happened in past few days which altered minds of these people. She was acknowledged and privileged like elder daughter in law on Raizada family.

Next morning when she came down she was greeted warmly by Nani, who hugged her and gave her blessings, but the most noteworthy thing which happened was when Shaym ji came closer to talk to her, mama ji interrupts him and giving her a chance to leave the place in peace.

She was about to enter the kitchen she get yet another shock of the morning, largest in the intensity

"Arnav bhayyia is calling you" HP informed her

She was about to make an excuse but payal insists that she should go and not to worry about breakfast encouraged by Anjali ji

"Yeah sure, you must see what Chotey wants? I'll send your breakfast to your room ''

Sending silent prayers to her DM and cursing Arnav she walked upstairs towards his room. "What this Laad Governor wants from her now?"

Once inside her room she looked around but he was nowhere to be seen. She looked outside too but he was not there too.

"Now where did he disappear?" she said this touching leaves of his favorite plants and thought to water them. She removed all dead leaves and weeds from them. She enjoyed this so much that she became oblivious of her surroundings, even the reason for which she was here.

She did not notice two dark chocolate brown eyes were observing her very fondly. After receiving breakfast he locked the door of his bedroom and stealthily walked towards his wife, who is looking like freshly blossomed flower in his garden.

Khushi felt being held by two strong arms; a touch she was very well aware of brought her back into present

"Good morning sweet heart" reply came in the husky low voice, forcing her to turn and melt into the arms of the man to which this honey dipped voice belong. "What are you doing?" she asked clearly annoyed.

"I am hugging my wife" he answered

"Oh wife. Well who is watching us now?" she asked looking straight into his eyes

"What?" he asked, perplexed

"Leave me at once. I am not helping you in your so called love act anymore." She said trying to unravel herself from his firm grip.

"No one is watching and I am not acting" holding her more tightly and pulling her towards himself

"Be careful Arnav Singh Raizada. Otherwise I'll think you have developed feelings for me" she retorted back

"Well I do have feelings for you. But let's have breakfast first don't want my wife to be starved."

She followed him inside and was made to sit on recliner by him. And he sat in front of her.

He raised his hand to feed her. But she rejected his offer by saying "I will manage myself."

"I know you can but for my sake" he said

She looked into his eyes for one second and that one second melted her. She bows down her face wishing she had not seen those eyes. He was shattered to the core

And she can't bear that.

"Why are you doing this?"She asked

"I am trying to win back my wife" he said pleadingly

"So you consider me as your wife, since when?" she asked

Arnav gulped he was in a fix about what to answer

"The purest relationship on earth is marriage which is based upon trust among husband and wife. And you never trusted me. Our relationship is baseless then how it will stand through thick and thin of life? It's a fake structure.

You never trusted me so never gave me a chance to clear my point of view. Last wish of a death sentenced prisoner is also rewarded but you did not allow me to even a wish. Now you know the truth from some other source and realize that I was innocent. So you started your love act.

I would never believe in you again in my life, never again" she cried

Arnav could not see her crying like that .he placed his head in her lap, while kneeling down in front of her.

"You have every right to punish me, I am not worthy of your pardon but please believe that I really love you and it's not an act. I can't share you with anyone else. I can't see somebody else holding you. You are the air I breathe in and without you I'll die. I was always scared to lose you. Please do not leave me. I won't be able to survive without you" he confessed.

Khushi was unable to trust her ears.

"I have to go. I cannot live with you and if you love me you have to let me go. This is your punishment if you want one" her heart was denying what she was saying.

"He deprived you from your family and relations and snatched your life from you and what you became? A lifeless body" she tried to reason herself.

"If you wish to leave me. I won't stop you. But I won't be able to see you with somebody else." He stood up cleaning his drenched face with back of his hand. He opened his drawer and picked the keys of his car

"I'll die instead" and left the room without giving a chance to utter a single word

A VM to match the end. I love this song and while writing this part this song was in my mind

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4VhItO8BksQ&feature=colike[/YOUTUBE]

So do tell me how it was

Do share your views and do comment

Links to previous parts are given below


Part 1: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2793432/os-after-math-updated-page-15

part 2: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2793432/os-after-math-updated-page-15?pn=3

part 3: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2793432/os-after-math-updated-page-15?pn=5

part 4: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2793432/os-after-math-updated-page-15?pn=8

part 5 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2793432/os-after-math-updated-page-15�

part 6 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2817143/os-aftermath-part-6

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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it !
Wonderful VM 👍🏼
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omg!! pls continue and pm me!!
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gud gud gud 👏 😛continue n pm plz ...thnks
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amazin part loved it..pm whn ya updt next
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omg...it was just heart wrenching last part...pliz continue soon...thnx 4da pm
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omg this was so heart breaking plz update soon
i want to know what happens next!!
thanks 4 the pm
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Wow beautiful work!

Really enjoyed it.

Great VM too x
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great update cant wait for the next one
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Awww poor arnav... continue soon, can't wait for the next parts :) :) :)

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