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mid-night-sun thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
thank you all for your comments
but guys plz add me as a buddy if u want pm for next update
thank you
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very good. looking forward to the next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
wonderful update pls continue fast

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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
Wow...hina
superb update...
the knife scene was unexpected...i was like omg...
Continue plz...and thank u soo much for the pm...
Edited by ShazArshi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
awesum dear...
really luved it...
update nxt soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: mid-night-sun

update part 4

Plz add me as ur buddy if you want PM next time ______________________________________________

My reactions while reading:
"You?" Khushi screamed

"Yes Khushi ji"

"Why are you holding me? Leave me" she said

"Why you have done this to me? It's because of you my life is this miserable?"

"You got married to Saleh Sahib when you know that I love you to the bits." Shaym said

"I don't love you and how shameless you are? You have a lovely wife who worshiped you and you are going to be a father soon. How disgusting you are? She shouted

"How many times I have to tell you that I don't love Rani Sahiba. She is merely an obstacle in my way to find Khushi .my Khushi" he retorted back.

"Leave my hands at once" Khushi said

"I'll not leave you now." Shayam Said

get off of her u stupid snake...how dare u touch her... you 🤬🤬🤬
"I don't love you as I always loved Arnav ji".she confessed

I only loved him and will always love him forever. I'll always be his, even when I was engaged to you my heart beats for him." Khushi replied

awww 😍
"I'll make you mine right now. And I'll kill him who snatched you from me." Shayam said
again you 🤬🤬🤬
"You won't be able to" Khushi said

With saying this Khushi plunged the knife she was holding in her belly at once.

what??? NO! tell me it was a fake knife..😲
Khushi!!!!

Two men screamed at that moment.

two men? Snake and who? 😲
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Arnav and Aakash were there to bid NK farewell at airport.

"Thanks for both of you for accompanying me".

I enjoyed my stay at your place, especially your marriage"

i'll really miss u NK 😭
"This is for you Nanav." He said while giving him a package

"Do watch it" he said while winking

"I have not watched it myself. But I have a duplicate of it. Mostly I captured clips of Khushi ji,my Desi girl. Now she is yours and you have full right to watch it"

oh yeah! here it comes..now the Snake wii DIE 😈
Arnav made a face.

N.K. said good bye to both and left.

i'll really miss u NK 😭😭
When Arnav reached office he put the gift aside on the table and starts his work. But his mind was not in it. He felt restless and decided to watch the CD which NK gave him.

He watched Khushi almost in every shot; that disturbed him and dejected to see her. He remembered every moment they had shared together.

😔 but wait...here it comes...
Suddenly the focus a bit blurred at one place; probably NK put his Cam Coder but forgot to switch off. Arnav can easily figure it out that it is a terrace of his house; no one is clearly visible but he could obviously distinguish the voices. It was Shaym and Khushi.
mmwwaahahaha 😈

He continues listening till the end and gradually realized what the hell he has done with Khushi. It's the biggest mistake of his life. He couldn't believe on himself. Now the truth is evident on him and the guilt he felt for ruining the life of his beloved means he ruined his own life.

Run Snake, RUN.. your days are numbered 😡
He picks up the phone and called Di's cell who told him that she was in mandir. He asked whereabouts of Shyam. Anjali told him he probably is at home. Arnav left for home immediately, when he reached home he heard voices from kitchen; he came close to kitchen and listened everything, at once Khushi plunged knife in her belly. He screamed Khushiii''''''.
No Khushi...your prince charming was listening...u could have atleast wited a few more mins

Arnav immediately entered into the kitchen to carry her in his arms, while Shaym stunned to see Arnav in fort of him;

"How dare you to touch my wife? I'll see you" Arnav yelled

MWAAHAHAHA...wait till he gets back u creepy SNAKE 🤬
He took Khushi in his SUV and rushed towards the hospital.



plz share your views

it motivate me to write more

you know i enjoyed reading it now don't u??? and you probably know what your next steps should be ☺️
Nicely done.
Edited by minihussain - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
Awesome and fantabulous read all the Parts just now plsss continue soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: minihussain

you know i enjoyed reading it now don't u??? and you probably know what your next steps should be ☺️
Nicely done.

loved your analysis dear, thank you
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderfull 👍🏼..we can expect these scenes in the show ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
good going. I loved the OS.. do continue soon and thanks for the pm

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