OS:after math (updated page 15)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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i tried to write something

hope you people like it

if you do plz share your views

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He was sick of all questions he do not want to answer'he wanted to be left alone. to have peace

So he left the place,walked towards his room in order to hide his pain but he was followed by none other than by his own di

"Chotey you cannot leave without answering me."

"Why did you do this to us? To me ? And most of all to khushi ji ?

We know you loved her.and if you wanted to marry her why did you not let us know? Can u reply me?"

He reached inside his room and slammed the door on her face.She couldnot believe what he had just done to her.

Tears began to form in her eyes.

Neither could he believe himself'..As soon as he was inside his room. tears started to flow from his eyes too, he could not believe what he has done and after knowing the whole truth about her and his so called jija ji why he was effected so much.?

Didn't she deserve it?She won't even dream of messing with my di's life now. he thought with a smirk.

But he was restless. He closed his eyes and one face came infront of his eyes.

why she? Why her face? She deserve it'isn't she?

But he very well knew the answers to his all questions..

I know I have not done justice to you khushi.

I want you to be my wife but not in this way

I wanted you to share my life but not this way.

I cannot see you with someone else.

she was the only one after his di whom he cared about most in this world.He closed his eyes again and her face after the slap she received from her mother was in front of him once again

He cursed himself.He knows what he has done to her.

what exactly was the inner turmoil of her and the effect of his actions on her.He knew her so well that is why he managed to play his cards and trapped her so well and leaving no option for her but to surrender to his conditions.

but what do now?

"let her stay where ever she was and do not panick.." his mind told him

"but she is my wife and love of my life" his heart replied

"ha love of your life who cheated you and your family? who tried to ruined your sis life and cheated you all the while with her innocent face"


he stand up and wiped his eyes and opened the door and came to the stairs where he saw his family sitting in living room.

he told his di,"I want khushi in my room now"

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Part 1: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2793432/os-after-math-updated-page-15

part 2: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2793432/os-after-math-updated-page-15?pn=3

part 3: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2793432/os-after-math-updated-page-15?pn=5

part 4: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2793432/os-after-math-updated-page-15?pn=8

part 5 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2793432/os-after-math-updated-page-15�

part 6 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2817143/os-aftermath-part-6

part 7: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/2841370/os-penalty

part 8 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/2852271/0s-penalty-part-2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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We need for you to continue, this is so real, I bet this is how it all unfolds, please continue you are on the right track, we need more to carry us through this weekend, at least we can let our imagination run away with us. Good work keep it up.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sammi5

We need for you to continue, this is so real, I bet this is how it all unfolds, please continue you are on the right track, we need more to carry us through this weekend, at least we can let our imagination run away with us. Good work keep it up.


thank you dear
i will try
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice one.. let them have a a big converation in the room pls :)
Please do PM when you update!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice..if you continue plzzz pm me!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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please do carry on😊 and also do not forget to PM me...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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plz update soon... sounds very real
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Loved it... instantly took me to the pre-cap...i could see it while i was reading...beautifully written..👏
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hey ! pls u Have to continue this😊
it's really gud..
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pm me when u update cheers!!

its good

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