OS: And I Hug You Back

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Lekha Ishwar

@-Destiny-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WVe80iZtlYU&ob=av2e[/YOUTUBE]

I found this As apt as possible for this OS

Bristy you are Absolutely BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!

lekha

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bmtdluver

@bmtdluver

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Your os was def not confusing or boring! I loved how you showed arnav's point of view and his train of thought. It was woderfully written and one of the best os's i've read

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deepa

@deeps_92

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+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

wow...it was amazing...

u r such a fab writter...

I'd probably be the last person she wants to see in the moment of crisis anyway.

this one reminded me of their past and how true it was...

on controvery to that, she hugged him ...

wow...very nice

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ilive2laugh

@ilive2laugh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

woah the emotions were described so beautifully

the words you chose, the confusion he was trying to

battel, realization he felt was amazing!

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priya pinky daswani

@pinky_blueskies

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Amazing OS!! It wasn't boring at all..

You've described and portrayed Arnav's side very well.

Home. The word flashed in my mind. Hers and Mine, right here, in this moment

-- loved the last line!

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..Damsel..

@..Damsel..

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

loved loved loved your OS...the way you depicted Arnav's thoughts and emotions was beautiful...your words dragged me to ArHi land once again...simply brilliant👏

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

This was beautiful Bristy!!

I loved reading it from Arnav's point of view. You've written his sentiments wonderfully!!

Fab work sugar...thanks for the PM!!

😊

Edited by FebruaryFlower - 13 years ago

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Chinchinchoo

@Prinsesse.Suvi

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

It's not confusing, its not boring, its fantastic!! I love the way you've portrayed Arnav's thoughts...he's so confused, he doesn't know what to do...and he's letting his natural instincts take over *Sigh*