my fate ashlok ff part 26 last part updated14/5 - Page 26

loved shlok's reply 2 aastha y he chose her over swati.loved theor talk n romantic moments.swati got divorced.who was her husband?is he going 2 get introduced?As i feared Swati is not here to trouble Ashlok.She is a witness 2 Ashlok luv.She knows Shlok's truth n is hiding from Aastha 2 not give her pain.Shlok saying dont let me leave n that he loves her n aastha's fear n shlok consoling her that he is with her were touchy.does that mean Shlok is a patient n swati is his Dr like Mohanlal Khushboo in a movie?

it is superb update
well created suspense now
eagerly waiting for next chapter
very well written
dont know wat makes her shatter and devastated
looking forward to next chapter
hope u continue soon
thank u

Something mysterious about Shlok and Swati's talk.What are they hiding from Aastha. And what is so serious that if Aastha knows that she will be devastated?! '!

Nice update

Nice update..

hai anu it was nice update...

PART 23
'shlok... ' I entered the room with his shirt... After ironing it...the sight make me smile
Shlok is sitting on bed checking some files and holding avantika's hand with his left hand.
'shlok your shirt...' I said while kept it on the couch... I sat down on the bed next to avantika... She is smiling looking at her father...as usual he is so much engrossed in files...
I want to talk about everything about his journey... The things that he hidden from me... I decided to not do so... I will find it myself...
He kept the file aside and looked at us. His smiling face is a treat to watch... He kissed me on my cheek and avantika's forehead and ran to wash room to get ready...
'asthu... I will be late today... It is busy schedule..today...' He said while put into his coat...
' hmmm... May I need to come office...' I asked while taking avantika in my hand...
'i will call...' He said
I saw he sat down next to me... And hold avantika's hand in his large ones... He kissed her forehead.
'papa Ki pyari Tata...' He said childishly... And give me a sudden kiss and walked down to have his breakfast...
He is already completed his breakfast when I came down after make her sleep...
'ayi... I am leaving bye'he said while walking towards the front door... I followed him to the front door...
'bye asthu...' He said
'shlok...' I heard Swati 's voice from behind... I turned and looked at her... She is ready to go somewhere..
'astha... I need to go out.. Shlok will you drop me at the junction...' She said smiling...
'ok get in... ' he said and walk up to the driver seat...
'bye astha...'
'bye Swati... Come back soon... We will go for a walk at evening...' I said... I miss my evening walks with sojal... The only time we two get each other... I made a mental note to call her... She is indeed a best sister...
I walked back after they leave...
'astha... Don't forget tomorrow is the day for her vaccination...' Ayi said while I walk back to my room...
I nodded and walk past her...
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I entered his study... I looked around the room... My eyes fall on our wedding picture... How beautiful that day... I know we are not perfect but with each other the life turn out to be more than perfect...
I walked up to his study table and and opened its drawer... I found the red colour slam book is neatly kept on it... I take it in my hands... I don't know what happened to me... I felt my heart race a million times... My hands are shivering... I slowly sat down on the chair...
Then slowly opened the first page of the dairy... I don't know what store for me in it... A silent prayer is only I have able to do...
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I opened my eyes to an unpleasant day... I looked around for her she is already gone... Oh god my head is spinning... I closed my eyes once again... But something is brake inside my head... The migraine is again returns... Oh god I have a meeting today... I kept my hands over my head...
I don't know when I again drift into sleep ... I woke up when I heard asthu's sweet voice in my ears... I need to get ready soon... I made mental note to visit the doctor tomorrow...'


SORRY GUYS FOR MAKING YOU ALL WAIT ... IT WILL GOING TO END SOON... I EXPECT AT LEAST A SINGLE WORD FROM YOU ALL.
ALL COMMENTS ARE WELCOMED

As usual a very good update, Ashlok's chemistry is superb. Waiting to know what Shlok and Swati are hiding from Aastha!!

hai anu...

very nice it is anu