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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

aastha started reading d diary again.shlok is a dying patient n he left 4 abroad to swati 4 his treatment.my guess was right.this is so sad.now what is d present condition?has his health improved?will his life be saved?Poor aastha.how will she bear this?



You will know in today's update...

Thank u Chechi for commenting...

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Posted: 9 years ago
PART 25
I closed the dairy... Not have the strength to read the left... Oh god he suffered a lot and he didn't say anything to me... Oh god ... Tears roll down from my eyes like a dam... Why god doing this to us... Oh god Pl keep him safe... I want to see him... I want to hug him... I want to ensure he is safe... I heard avantika's cry and kept the dairy safely on the table and walks up to my room... She is woke up from her sleep... I sat down next to her... Oh baby you are too lucky to have a father like him...i kissed on her forehead... She smiled at me... Oh god plz keep her smile like this... I lay down next to her...and hugged her... I don't know what I now going to do... He suffered a lot alon in an unknown city... Oh god I need to be there for him... Everyone hide everything from me... Tears roll down from my eyes and fall on to my little girls cheeks... I kissed that drop of tears and whispered into her ears... 'Mom never going to cry... Promise...' I closed my eyes to feel her presence near me...
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'astha... Why are so silent today...? I know you usually talk nonstop..' Swati asked...
I looked ahead of me... It is almost five minutes we starts to walks through the pavement...
'swati... Will you say truth to me when i ask something...?' I asked without looking at her eyes... I know if I fo my eyes betray myself...
'sure ask me ...' She said...
'is shlok is your patient?' I asked without looking at her...
'astha how you ...?' I felt the tension in her voice...
'i know Swati... Tell me how is he now..?' I looked at her face for the first time in our walk...
'well he is alright know ... Perfectly...' She said confidently...
'may I believe you...' I asked...
'hmm ' she nodded...
'sure... There is sometimes we all loss hope... But he have faith in your love... That is the real medicine which cure him... And also it is his decision to not say anything to you... He need to see you safe... Now shlok is a miracle for all of us... ' I looked at her face... I saw a proud friend in her...
'then why you came to India... If he is alright ...' I asked my doubt ...
'for the last check up... He is too stubborn to obey what the doctor say... The truth is he is just vanishing from there...just to see you...' She Said smiling...
'oh god...' I kept my hands on my mouth...
'hey astha... We done the check up today... He is back to normal... Now only need yearly check up... That you can done it here...' She said .
I hold het hands to thank her... Tears rolled from my eyes... I felt her as an angel...I wiped my tears...
'i never supposed to be cry... I promised my child...' I said smilingly...
'k now lets walk back... I am tired...' She said and turned to walk to home...
'you are too lazy swati...' I shook my head and starts to walk back..
I saw her laughing... Really she is an angel...
'swati... Don't say to him... That I know everything...' I said from behind...
'i promise you...' She said and we together walk to home... I know she may make ayi crazy...
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Posted: 9 years ago
So a different shade of Swati in your story.
I like that.She truely has been an angel for Ashlok here.
very good update!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rd0309

So a different shade of Swati in your story.

I like that.She truely has been an angel for Ashlok here.
very good update!!



Thank u... Dear...
Swati is different here...as an angel...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice..update
Liked swati character in your story...she is so different
Waiting to know shlok reaction on Aastha knowing his truth..
Thank you😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Anu
Thank a lot nice and emotional update
Don't end this soon
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago



Only a kkk...
More comments will be welcomed...don't hesitate to do. ..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vaishux

Nice..update

Liked swati character in your story...she is so different
Waiting to know shlok reaction on Aastha knowing his truth..
Thank you😳😳




Thank u dear... I am happy that every one liked Swati...
Keep reading
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nadeeka1200

Hi Anu

Thank a lot nice and emotional update
Don't end this soon
Waiting for next update






Thank u dear... ...
Every good things need to be end...
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Posted: 9 years ago
PART 26
When we entered the gate I saw his car is parked neatly on the courtyard... We walked together to the living room... Shlok and ayi is playing with Avanti...
I felt like hug him... Oh god I want to be in his arms...
I smiled at them with my ever cute one... I only know what I holds in my heart...
We walked up to them and I sat next to shlok... His mere presence make me feel like heaven...
'shlok,ayi... I am decided to leave today...' Swati said... I looked at her face shockingly...
'what happened Swati?you only came yesterday...' Ayi said... I felt she is sad... And I also...
'no aunty... I can't stay here a long.. I have great responsibility... My patients and now my research... I need to be there...' She protested
'swati... Plz one more day with us... Plz...' I said... I don't know what more I need to say...
'no astha... My ticket is ready...' She said while pull avantika's chubby cheeks.. She smiled at her...
''when the flight?' Shlok asked
'i need to report at 9 pm...' She said...
''we will come to drop you...' He said looking at me... I nodded... I don't know why? But I felt a fear crept in up my heart...
I walked up to my room taking avantika in my hands...
I kept her on the bed and looked at her face it is shining like a flower...
'i love you...' I whispered... I saw her lips curved into a smile...few minutes later I found shlok stand near to me...
'asthu... We need to go at 6pm... We will have the food from outside...' I nodded without looking at his face...
'asthu... ' he shook me out of my low response... I just turned and warped my hands around his neck... I don't know what to say... Silent tears fall down through my cheeks... He warped his hands around me...and caressed my head... I love the feeling whenever he hug me...
'asthu... Are you alright...' He asked me...
I nodded without withdrew from him...
We stay together for a long... Untill avantika made sound to brake our moments...we looked together at her and smiled... And she smiled widely... Oh god how cute she looks...

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At the airport...

'astha... You two are made for each other... I am happy to you two... Stay like this forever...' Swati hugged me ... I only know is ny eyes are turned moist... Shlok is playing with avantika...
'thank u Swati... I can't able to thank u enough... Shlok is my life... If anything happened to him... I don't know then what I am...' My words brake...in middle...
'hey astha... Don't cry... He is alright now ... Perfectly... If you need any help don't hesitate to call me...' She assured me with her smile... We heard swati's name announced from the desk...
I hugged her once again...
'keep it as a secret always...' I whispered into her ears...
'sure...'
'hey... What's there to talk like this...'shlok asked while coming up to us...
We two smiled at him...
I take avantika in my hands...
'aunty ko Tata bulauo...' I said to her...
'tata... My little pumpkin...'she said and kissed her forehead...
'k bye shlok...' She shook hands with shlok...
'bye Swati... Thank u for everything...'he said with gratitude... She nodded with a smile and walked to the elevator... We stay there untill she fade away from our vicinity... A drop of tear fall down from my eyes...
'asthu lets go...' He said while taking avantika from my hand...

We sat down on the car... I hold her little arms to my heart... I looked at his face... And closed my eyes to thank the god almighty for giving me a wonderful partner...
'oh god Pls keep him safe ...' I prayed in my heart...
I opened my eyes and looked above ... There a American flight take off to the destination... I thanked god to send her as an angel...
I kept my head to his shoulder... And closed my eyes for a sound sleep till reach home...
Only I know is his love Is return in my fate...


THE END
Edited by dazzles - 9 years ago

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