New Ashlok SS-Those Three Little words**cs and part 1 updated (page 8)

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sreekailas

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

It was really sweet devu.. Wonderful job!!

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jazsidhu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

wonderfull...

thx fr the pm...

Edited by jazsidhu - 10 years ago

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Devu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: maitydeblina
nice prologue😊best wishes for ur new ss👍🏼😉😊continue soon😛😊😉
🥳

thz a lot dear🤗

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akashavani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Well Devu...loved the character sketch...Shlok's arrogance and Astha's down to earth attitude... interesting contrast .

Both are very aware of eachother completely. ...already attracted. ...so tention and pulling ...hmmm... waiting for more.

Devu...your storyline is interesting. ...and your narrating ...is just flowing and flying ...taking us with it easily. ...into relating with the chracters...as if we know them and are with them...personally.

Waiting for more ...Tfs...pm me.

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Devu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: sireesha76
Interesting prologue
All the best Devu 👍🏼

thz a lot dear😃

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aastha agrawal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Awesome update dear ...looking forward to the next update thanks 4 the pm...

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Devu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: mahirmukhtar
First of all congratulations to you Devu for writing your first SS! 👍🏼
But it doesn't look like your first writing 😉 it's simply fantastic! 👏

Loved the prologue 😃 and the title is superb too those three little words ofcourse of love! 😉

The banner is very beautiful too a true blue hypnotic effect on the eyes! 😃

Shlok is arrogant i liked that part love arrogant heroes! 😛😉

So it seems a contract marriage of about one year is gonna happen and both Astha and Shlok don't like each other really ohh 😉 will got to see their hot nok jhok! 😈😉

Will wait eagerly for the first chap devu! You've raised my curiosity level! 😉

aww my dearest mahi🤗thk u soo much for the lengthy and lovely comment dear😳

thz for your love and encouragement,it means a lot to me🤗

u want to see hot nok jok😈😉ok try my best😉

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Dhth1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Nice one Devu...waiting for the next...tks for the pm

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Elation

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Posted: 10 years ago

#79

Firstly, congo for starting a fiction Devu.👏 Nicely written and nice story line! Well done👍🏼 Eager to know what happened n what will happen. Update soon😳

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Jhuma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#80

Nice update Devu oh fight at first sight Ashlok r mad at each-other but will mad for each-other in time right 😉! Shlok n Astha r polls apart but they agree for marriage but only for 1 year very interesting. Thanks for PM n waiting for next update dear.

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