New Ashlok SS-Those Three Little words**cs and part 1 updated (page 8)

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seeheeryou

@seeheeryou

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Wanna give u a tight hug buds, ri8 nw 🤗

You are such a cute writer mahn!

Muaaahhh :*

U asked me b4 dat, whether u wl b able 2 grew upto my expectations n nw I hv d answer 😊 Ofcourse YOU DID!

I lovvveeed it yaar 😳

Both d cs n update!

In d cs, I felt like AaShlok having sm traces of resemblance with vijay simran of Priyamanavale 😉

Bt d chapter was smthng different!

Arrogant Agnihotri n Drama Queen Kirlosker r frnds of two love birds 😲 😆

Do work as cupids and eventually fall in love 😉

Bt d prologue 😲

Let me Connect d dots

It wl take time n, n wl b more easier if u update soonish! 😉 😆

Ps: Last lathae ashareeri aara? 🤣

Edited by ..AngelicAnu.. - 10 years ago

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Tooba Mahir Mukhtar

@mahirmukhtar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

What an update devu my sweet girl! 🤗 It had the right amount of wow factor! 👏

Simply outstanding, believe me you are a very very good writer, infact you are loaded with the ammunition of writing! 😉

I loved them both on first sight 😉 and how could i not i love arrogant heroes and spirited heroines 😛.

And Mr Shlok Agnihotri has no illusions about love but he is gonna fall flat on his face, people like him do he won't be hit by love but would be bitten by love! 😈😆

Loved that hotel scene to the core...

Both uncomfortable with each others presence, but still noting every point about each other's conversation 😉😆 first sign of attraction is there! 😉

Keep it up gal 👍🏼 and stun us with your next update, i am immensely liking the storyline! 😉

Edited by mahirmukhtar - 10 years ago

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meerab

@TomNJerry...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Lovely start to a lovely story...with khati maathi nok jhok...😳😳😳😳
So thats clear that ashlok dont like each other...now it will be super duper treat to read the story that how the two of them will fall in love😳😳😳😳
And loved the character sketch sweety...👏👏👏👏
Continue the story soon...

Edited by meerab... - 10 years ago

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Deepa Vasudev

@dv19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

loved the first chap buddy .
so they both know each other..
but despise each other to the core.
how will they survive the marriage and the rest..God only knows.

nicely written.

Edited by deepavasudev - 10 years ago

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naina

@hp_2006

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Character Sketch is lovely dear..⭐️⭐️⭐️

I loved the way Shlok and Aastha were avoiding each other...😛

Arrogant Agnihotry and chatterbox Kirloskar😉😆😆 Cute jodi they will make..😃

Lovely update Part one Devutty...I know its short becoz you are having fever..😲 Buts its ok dear..I know you will make the next part longer..😃😃

Love you a looot Devuuu🤗

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Saranya

@charanyaaj

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Beautiful devu...
After reading the prologue i thought the story is like priyamanavela film...
But it is not like that movie...
Loved the first part...
Shlok-Astha dont like each other...
Waiting fr second part...
Update soon...
Thanks for the PM

Edited by charanyaaj - 10 years ago

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deblina

@maitydeblina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Nice update:)iliked it :)continue soon:)and who is that person that says whose marriage?:)
To know the ans will be waiting for next update:)
Happy new yr in adv:)