New Ashlok SS-Those Three Little words**cs and part 1 updated (page 8) - Page 7

Lovely update..
I love the cs and the update..
Ashlok are too cute, one arrogant another fierce..loved their monologue, contradicting each pther but not saying it in front..
I think their will be cupid in their love story..
Who is this another voice at the end?
Shlok won't be in love 🤔 well see mr.! 😉
Update soon..
Thnx for the pm..

lovely start dear
waiting to read more

Originally posted by: avni4

Thank u so muchhh for pm...n it doesnt look like ur first work...seems like u hv master in writing work...n story sounds like tom and jerry now but i feel that u will

Turn it into a fairy tail latter...good job yaara..its beautiful

Originally posted by: whitelily

interesting start 👏

Originally posted by: charanyaaj

All the best devu 👍🏼
Beautiful prologue dear

Originally posted by: k.taddy1234

Nice Start.. Love it very much

Originally posted by: mahirmukhtar

unres on pg 8 😉

Originally posted by: Efinah36

Awesome start
Great Banner
Thanks for pm
Update soon

Originally posted by: hp_2006

Heyyy my Devuttyyy...😃 Super aayitund ketto..🥳

Loved the prologue..Its really really interesting..

Congrats Devumolll on your first SS..🤗

I am eagerly waiting for your first part..😃😃😃

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

Devuuu congrats for your first SS!🥳

The prologue was amazing! Wonderful

Very interesting

So both have to get married but are not pleased with their life partner to be ^^

Funny and something new

Waiting for more