New Ashlok SS-Those Three Little words**cs and part 1 updated (page 8)

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Bobbie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Interesting prologue...can't wait. 😉

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avni aaradhya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Thank u so muchhh for pm...n it doesnt look like ur first work...seems like u hv master in writing work...n story sounds like tom and jerry now but i feel that u will

Turn it into a fairy tail latter...good job yaara..its beautiful

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Saranya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

All the best devu 👍🏼
Beautiful prologue dear

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k.taddy1234

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Nice Start.. Love it very much

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Efinah36

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Awesome start
Great Banner
Thanks for pm
Update soon

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naina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Heyyy my Devuttyyy...😃😃😃😃 Super aayitund ketto..🥳

Loved the prologue..Its really really interesting..

Congrats Devumolll on your first SS..🤗

I am eagerly waiting for your first part..😃😃😃

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GoWithTheRhythm

@GoWithTheRhythm

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Devuuu congrats for your first SS!🥳

The prologue was amazing! Wonderful

Very interesting

So both have to get married but are not pleased with their life partner to be ^^

Funny and something new

Waiting for more

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deblina

@maitydeblina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

nice prologue😊best wishes for ur new ss👍🏼😉😊continue soon😛😊😉

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sireesha76

@sireesha76

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Interesting prologue

All the best Devu 👍🏼

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Tooba Mahir Mukhtar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#20

First of all congratulations to you Devu for writing your first SS! 👍🏼

But it doesn't look like your first writing 😉 it's simply fantastic! 👏

Loved the prologue 😃 and the title is superb too those three little words ofcourse of love! 😉

The banner is very beautiful too a true blue hypnotic effect on the eyes! 😃

Shlok is arrogant i liked that part love arrogant heroes! 😛😉

So it seems a contract marriage of about one year is gonna happen and both Astha and Shlok don't like each other really ohh 😉 will got to see their hot nok jhok! 😈😉

Will wait eagerly for the first chap devu! You've raised my curiosity level! 😉