New Ashlok SS-Those Three Little words**cs and part 1 updated (page 8) - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Devu beautiful prologue n lovely banner. Interesting Ashlok marring each-other only for 1 year hmmm. Waiting for first update n hanks for PM dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: srilanka123

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Lovely prologue.
Continue soon dear...

thz dear😳i will😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: meerab...

Congo for your first work sweety🤗...
And the prologue...I loved it❤️ ...it was so cute😳...
Ashlok going to marry but just for one year😕😕😕...but why😃???...
Waiting for this beautiful story to progress😛...so continue soon dear😉...
Btw your banner is sooo beautiful😳😳😳

hii dearuuu am so happy to hear these lovely words from u,it means a lot🤗❤️
don't worry dear i will give all the ans😉
awww thz a bunch😳😳😳
i will dear😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: bobbiedhillon

Interesting prologue...can't wait. 😉

thz bobbie😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thz siham😃
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Originally posted by: Dogan1

congratulations devu

nice...keep writing

thz a lot divya🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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first of all congrats for your 1st SS 🤗

fantastic prologue can't wait for the upcoming updates 😃

but why are they going to marry just for one year??
maybe both ashlok cursing there father for fixing there marriage???anyways do update soon😳 can't wait anymore😳😳

thanx for the PM😉😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
loved the prologue

so ashlok are gonna get married for a year?

well will wait for that answer

loved how ashlok were looking at the person who fixed their marraige, almost wanting to kill them 🤣'

will wait for further chapters on why they can't tolerate each other

dear you write so well, no worries

do update soon

welcome to the writing club🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank u so much all for ur support🤗means a lot to me❤️

Ok guys let me introduce the two families in this story for u.

kindly ignore mistakes😊

Character Sketch

Agnihothri Family

Niranjan Agnihothri,one of the top business tycoon of Mumbai ,and CEO of Agnihothri Group of Institues.Anjali Agnihothri,Niranjan Agnihothri's wife,a simple and lovely house wife.They have two handsome sons,Varad Agnihothri elder one,completed his Ph.d in journalism and running his own business in media field.he has got two precious stones in his life,his wife Sojal Varad Agnihothri and his little princess Kavya Varad Agnihothri and living a happy married life...

Shlok Agnihothri,the younger son of Mr&Mrs Agnihothri,completed his MBA graduation from London,currently joined his family business as MD of Agnihothri Group of Institues.he is a full of life type guy always likes to live a modern life and loves to live in foreign countries.He doesn't like to live in India,especially he doesn't like the girls in India.According to him the girls in India are quite classy and nave type.he always says to his gang that he won't marry a typical Indian girl.Besides all he loves his family to core,specially baba,he is the ladla of baba.family is the only factor that hold back him to stay here.now also,for his baba's sake he has decided to join their business...

Kirlosker Family

A small and happy family including Avdoot Kirlosker,one of the top industrialist of Mumbai,CEO of Kirlosker Group of Industries and his better half Kalindi Kirlosker and their beloved daughter Astha Kirlosker,a lovely,cheerful and most importantly a short tempered girl,who just complete her MBA graduation.she is a simple girl.who doesn't give attention to the luxurious modern life and always loved to live a simple and happy life with her family...

Edited by DEVU.NAIR - 10 years ago
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Part One

Hotel Marine Plaza in Mumbai

Two hansome guys sitting near the window,facing to the sea,"Arey yar Ram,where is she???it's getting late,I told you these girls have no standard,punctuality etc etc etc...how u guys fall in love with these crazy people...unbelievable!!!!!

Oho my angry young man,,the great Shlok Agnihothri,they will come,plz wait na,just 10 more minutes,for me...plzzz...once u fall in love u will understand my situation,buddy...

Shlok:ok,but only 10 more minutes...and what did u say,Me..In LOVE !! ha ha good jok..but highly impossible..

Ram:not impossible,it's possible..we will see(winked)

Shlok:ofcz,we will see...

After 5 minues,2 beautiful girls entered in to the hotel room,and walking towards the table occupied by our handsome's..

Shlok :What the???what she doing here???

Ram :who?

Shlok :Arey wo,that drama queen kirlosker.

Ram :(try to control laugh)wo,she is best friend of saya.

Shlok:What??but..

Ram :(cut of his words)cool buddy,she is a nice girl.plzz,don't embarrass me in front of them.

Shlok :(murmuring)nice girl,my foot...

At the same time in between those beautifuls...

Astha :Wait Saya

Saya :What happened Asthu??

Astha :look there,that arrogant agnihothri.what he doing here??

Saya :(not at all surprised)he is best friend of Ram,they are collagemates.

Astha :What??why didn't u tell me before,I...

Ram's words stoped Astha...

Ram :hi beautiful,why r u standing there,plz sit na..

Saya :asthu,don't get upset yar,plz for my sake,u don't mind him.now let's go..

Astha :(suppressing anger)mmm..let's go.

Saya :hello handsomes,what's up...

Ram :hi dear,nothing just waiting for you 2.

Astha and Shlok didn't look at each other.

Ram :hey astha,what happened to u?why r u so silent?

Astha :nothing yar,am ok.

Shlok :(completely ignoring astha)hi saya,how r u sweetie..

Astha :(in mind)sweetie!!!oh god,these firlty guys and their tantrums..

Saya :yaa shlok,am fine,way abt u..

Shlok :Me..what happened to me,always coool...(slightly pulling his collar)

Astha :(quite irritated)so ram,what's ur plan abt marriage???

Shlok : (in mind)ohh,this chatter box gonna open her bundle of enquiries..

Saya :asthu,marriage..

"whose marriage",suddenly somebody's voice stopped their convo.four of them looked at the figure just standing infront of them...

This is part one hope u like it..

Edited by DEVU.NAIR - 10 years ago

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