New Ashlok SS-Those Three Little words**cs and part 1 updated (page 8) - Page 4

Originally posted by: akashavani

DEVU...Absolutely loved your ...lovey banner...and prologue to dear...and the story line too...Ur narrating is interesting too.

AShlok seems to be getting married..on one year contract...btw them only maybe..,...must see how they will fall in love ...

Waiting for more ...loved it .

Originally posted by: Subhashini_chow

Hey Pinky on Mission writing👏

Lovely prologue dear ..Don't worry there is no mistakes at all

and very interesting update😃

They decide to apart after one year before Marriage how come

but we know they never apart Ashlok forever😊

Love the Title n Bannar

Originally posted by: deepavasudev

Congo DEvu..

Sorry for late reply..

ok now..coming to Prologue.. too good.

U write very well.

These two getting married ,but will seperate after a year..

Nice mind mumblings and their frustration to break up or not to meet..very well emoted..

And my Devu became a writer..Nice..

Join the club..

Nice update..wtg for chap 1

Originally posted by: swathin

lovely prologue
waiting...

Originally posted by: Priya_ShrAvi

wheee...congratulations my dearest... U started writing 🥳

Loving ur banner... Prologue... Concept... Tittle... loving everything about this story dear ❤️

So these two gonna break their heads to utter those three little words... Interesting n very romantic concept buddy 👍🏼

Can't wait to read the updates continue soon
ALL THE BEST! 🤗

very interesting update😃.😃

Hey devu, interestng prologue yaar.i like your writing style. Don't felt that this is your first work. Update soon and pm me.

lovely prologue...
so ashlok marriage fixed...
both r unhappy or i say worried as they cant tolerate d other... but i dont understand y both said they hv to bear d other 4 1 yr.. i mean r they thinking of contract marriage or to tk divorce after 1 yr...
waiting 4 d story to begin..
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm...

Originally posted by: DEVU.NAIR

awww thank u soo much sweetie for ur encouragement,it means a lot🤗❤️

u hooked😲😆

Awww No Mention, u means a lot to us 🤗
Yup hooked to d story, kya problem hai? 🤣

First, Congratulations -you are now a writer 👏