||AsHlok SS~The Voice~ Chapter6 Pg62 Up*8Oct14|| - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update dear👏
so finally ashlok met😛
kavya is shlok's daughter😕
interesting story😉
continue soon...
thz 4 the pm😊
Edited by DEVU.NAIR - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just for the record ..its not cross checked!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Eeeps...omg omg OMG!! Suri can't believe you...Istanbul? Subanci? Istaqlal street? Burger King aur woh bhi Jihan ka burger king? 😲 Can't believe you actually mentioned Jihan? How cruel of u? Emotional kar diya poori tarah se yaad dila kar 😭 My heart was beating so fast while reading this update, thought it will burst 😳😆
I was wondering after the last update if you will bring Turkey into it and how you will make Astha and Shlok meet. I loved how you built up the whole scenario. Astha is already living in Istanbul with Sameer and Shlok has recently moved there because of his job. Btw what's Shlok's occupation here?
And what a surprise? Shlok has a daughter with Swati, Kavya? How cutee! 😳😃
Astha and Shlok's meeting was so endearing esp. how you made Astha hesitant to meet Shlok yet still craving to see him. Her attempt to wait and watch him from distance for days and him having spotted her from day 1 without her knowledge was all very touching. It just makes one realise the depth of their feelings for each other even after ending up with different people.
Aww Astha imagines her daughter's eyes resembling Shlok's...how cute is that 😃
Don't understand Sameer's behaviour though. Why did the guy marry Astha if he wasn't interested in her in the first place? Why this estrangement? 😕 But one thing is confirmed, he's an idiot 😡

P.s. I have already read this chapter twice...and I am sure you can imagine why.. 😳😳
Edited by Sam_15 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
y did dat sameer married astha if he was nt interested in her
and shlok has a daughter
waiting for the next part
do update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Its really awesome yaar...
Ashlok are truly destined...even the nature showered it's blessings in the form of rain...
Whoa...u always use rain in perfect situations...

Loved the part how u mentioned astha's hesitation to meet shlok..and shlok observing her from day1...and love this ever energetic,bubbly sohai...she's cute...

And astha wants her daughter's eyes like shloks' hmm it's something different...to mention about 2 lost souls...n I like it...

Sameer...he's damn annoying...spineless creature...

Hmm...actually I read this update thrice...its so good...keep up the good work!!
Thanks for the update n pm.


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DEVU.NAIR

awesome update dear👏

so finally ashlok met😛
kavya is shlok's daughter😕
interesting story😉
continue soon...
thz 4 the pm😊

thanks dear!
and yeh she is his daughter from Swati😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sam_15

Eeeps...omg omg OMG!! Suri can't believe you...Istanbul? Subanci? Istaqlal street? Burger King aur woh bhi Jihan ka burger king? 😲 Can't believe you actually mentioned Jihan? How cruel of u? Emotional kar diya poori tarah se yaad dila kar 😭 My heart was beating so fast while reading this update, thought it will burst 😳😆

I was wondering after the last update if you will bring Turkey into it and how you will make Astha and Shlok meet. I loved how you built up the whole scenario. Astha is already living in Istanbul with Sameer and Shlok has recently moved there because of his job. Btw what's Shlok's occupation here?

Hahaha i just could not predict your reaction to this. Emotional?😆 Jihan's burger king is what i will look for if i ever go to Turkey...even if it doesnt exist. But i think it does only its not owned by an owner named Jihan.
Turkey has been a dream ever since JKP! If ever i think of JKP i think of Turkey too. So i had to set this story in Turkey!
I still need to think of Shlok's occupation😆

And what a surprise? Shlok has a daughter with Swati, Kavya? How cutee! 😳😃
Astha and Shlok's meeting was so endearing esp. how you made Astha hesitant to meet Shlok yet still craving to see him. Her attempt to wait and watch him from distance for days and him having spotted her from day 1 without her knowledge was all very touching. It just makes one realise the depth of their feelings for each other even after ending up with different people.

Kavya is integral here.
Of course she was going to see him after ages... kuch tu hat ke karna tha ne. waise i once read a similar scene in a novel.. If you knew me any beter i do imitate a lot.
There is still more to come!

Aww Astha imagines her daughter's eyes resembling Shlok's...how cute is that 😃
Don't understand Sameer's behaviour though. Why did the guy marry Astha if he wasn't interested in her in the first place? Why this estrangement? 😕 But one thing is confirmed, he's an idiot 😡


Sameer aint much at fault...you will realise! its different!

P.s. I have already read this chapter twice...and I am sure you can imagine why.. 😳😳


Twice? my my! Yes i can make that out!😆

Love ya!
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey suri
just red both the parts
it's quite interesting
no ling comment as m in a hurry
but keep pming me
😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

hey suri
just red both the parts
it's quite interesting
no ling comment as m in a hurry
but keep pming me
😃

Sure Aro and i hope you are spending a good time in Makkah!😃
Dont forget to pray for me!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ruhakhan

y did dat sameer married astha if he was nt interested in her

and shlok has a daughter
waiting for the next part
do update soon

Well his character will be seen from Astha's POV so its a little difficult to say here.
Thank You for reading😃

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