ASHLOK FF - AT FIRST SIGHT Last Chapter - Page 56

Originally posted by: sathuraj

ANU... A BIG FOR YOU...

Originally posted by: sathuraj

Deepa... Wow... just amazing dear...

you have described Astha situation in a lovely and beautiful way...

my god u r a gifted writer dear...

so amazing and mindblowing...

A Big Hug to you dear...

To My Sweet friend...

Sathu..

Originally posted by: sathuraj

Sree...Wow...

You have wrote it so well... lovely comparison...just amazing dear...

As deepa suggest u should start writing story/FF... u are a good writer...

waiting to read a lot from you...

Originally posted by: sathuraj

THANK YOU ANU... FOR THE LOVELY WRITING...YOUR WORDS GAVE US ...

A BEAUTIFUL WRITING FROM DEEPA...

A LOVELY WORDING FROM SREE...

Originally posted by: bm11

Anu, sorry for the missed comment yesterday.

Pretty busy these days, dear, but your story is my first concern.

It's just marvellous, so many hidden meanings and desires. I feel goose-skin😳

Tenderness and the desire to touch are the first sings always.

It's just can't be otherwise and you showed it perfectly.👏

But Anu...😡 where is the promised kiss???😡😡😡

I waited till the end and... there was one fat "No, Jane, you obsessed creature"

Why are you doing this to me? To all of us?😭

However, no matter what tortutres you plan to impose on us I will read.

and I still believe in the man😆

Anu, 👍🏼

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: miac

Wow she decided to came out of shell..good 4 her,right time...cant wait to know about the kids and what to say ur shlok is a sweetheart gentleman. ...love him more in each and every update. .

Originally posted by: deepavasudev

Hi Anu,

Spider and the cobweb:

The spider was weaving the cobweb for its eggs to lay.. It failed 6 times and it dint find defeated.. it rose high and finally the seventh time it wove the web correctly.. and perfect..

Identical Twins :

They were inside in the womb .. not even 8 weeks.. one was strong..other one weak.. one started loosing its strength other tried to support... he did support till 3 months.. Finally the weaker died along with him/her he also died...they were inseperable ,,heart and soul..

After math :

The first of five years they struggle and get.. God took them off in 3 months.. but there he was as strong as the China wall with his huge heart not letting go the courage of hers or his to support her physically and mentally.. saying.. IM HERE FOR YOU ANY TIME.. IM NOT BOTHERED ABOUT OURS WE HAVE OR DONT HAVE.. IM ALWAYS THERE WITH YOU..

The tears of hers.. were there.. she winced in pain internally but for his sake.. she dint.. the only support was him , his courage and a word Im there with you ..as always..

a rose, a tear.. a silence.. a kiss.. a hug.. reqd /not reqd . the words and the concern and the love in the heart and so transparent in the eyes.. was more sufficient...that the unexpressed also could be felt ... from the beat of the heart.

yes like the Spider story.. she succeeded with second time one more..

Asthas courage and Shloks determination - She finally expressed.. and the concern of his..she was overwhelmed.. like a gal of hers as first love ...she felt the joy of the kiss and the gentle men ship.. Can I pls..open the door atleast.. and a Thank you..

Really good.. very good update anu.. I could write this only da.. The twins - for inseperable and unconditional love.. spider and cobweb - for courage and determination

the hubbys love - Shlok .. the women - Astha with sorrow.. but finally found courage and hit on his shoulder for support..

he and she are now inseparable like heart and soul..

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

Cuteness overloaded *-* loved each word Finally she is giving in to her feelings for him

I hope his family will accept her children she deserves happiness:))

Pls do continue soon the chapter was way to short xD

Originally posted by: priya_avi

Anu...we asked u for a kiss...u compensated with two kisses in hands...k never mind...

Bcoz its a really beautiful update...she found solace in him...letting her wounds heal...and the ultimate reason is my shlokie boy...he s adorable...n liked how he concerned about her n denied to meet her in mor...but was standing right infront of her...*love effect* cant wait to meet her...n the tear drop...can understand about what was she thinking...poor soul...
K tell me...next meet...shlok confession...astha emo breakdown...is it...
Waiting...Waiting..

Thank u anu for the update n pm...

Originally posted by: rbb1

Anu amazing update they are both so sweet and Innocent, he is so thought I like how he went to take her home even thought he knew he won't go inside it's nice to see him care for her so much he is such a gentlemen, finally she slowly getting the idea that he will be there for her and truly does lover her