ASHLOK FF - AT FIRST SIGHT Last Chapter - Page 54

Originally posted by: rbb1

no need to thank me, I should thank you for posting a really nice story

Originally posted by: deepavasudev

CARD, CAGE AND COURAGE ...

CAGE :

I was green and my beaks were red , my flying wings and feathers were cut.. when I was not even 6 months..I was asked to do the Monkey job oh sorry the TOTHA JOB.. oh sorry the PUPPET JOB..

I wanted to fly high in the sky.. some thing was snatched.. by my own.. or so called own..

I wanted to touch the sky.. flying like a bird.. but my own guilt .. or my happy but short lived future with two fruits in hand.. with a word called commitment..

MY FREEDOM - snatched at a very young age and again committed because of situations in a cage..

Like a bird.. whose hands and legs are tied.. expecting a day.. to come.. SO I CAN FLY AND BREATHE FRESH...

COURAGE :

After all past tortures.. why I became so numb.. helpless.. not so brave and not having enough strength to fight.. why I have become like a ROCK.. OR SAY.. a statue.. with no feelings.. Im wrong.. the statue carved does have emotions running thru its face or postures.. so .. why im so.. I have feelings.. I can reveal.. but why I have tied ..in me.. why iam not letting it out.. I think.. im scared..but why should I be.. for whom..my so called own.. or the society.. or the new one crossing my life.. thinking.. it might be my RETURN TO PAST..SECOND SAGA..

No... I think.. I just need to MUSTER SOME COURAGE.. IM NO MORE THE PARROT IN CAGE ..

CARD :

I did.. muster the courage .. and finally... spoke to him.. yes..HIM.. the Mr.MCP.. is he so.. I don't think so. . he should be called the Mr.SSP.. - SOFT AND SENSITIVE PERSONALITY.. having a PMA..- Positive mental Attitude... I think.. it will take some time.. so I will also and he will also.. TOGETHER.. WE UNDERSATND.. US AND OURS US ( AS OF NOW ) AND OURS - MY FUTURE FAMILY..

The card.. YES.. the Invitation card...

On this day.. at this ..Church.. Shlok and Astha.. are becoming one.. in the matrimonial bond.. blessed by all Gods..

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All these happen in a dream.. The situation is .. Where Astha.. is in night shift.. and she dozes of for some time in mid..say... 50 mins.. The thoughts of past some hour.. kept on thinking..it has become a dream.. where her.. confused and flying.. fluttering mind.. makes her think .. from the past to the future ... with a PROSPECT of POSITIVITY.. THAT she will have him.. as HUBBY..

Yes... she is TAKING A STEP FORWARD.. BUT ...ONE STEP AT A TIME..

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Anu.. this is what I could write on your chapter..

She is the bird in cage.. She did muster her courage to her own Freedom.. on the process.. Confused lil bit.. but positivity is all thru her actions.. of phone calls.. or her inner mind fight.. and finally calling him.. for " NOT NOTHIN ".. it starts with hi.. I will disconnect.. later.. HEY NOT NO.. NOT NOW.. LET US TALK.. So she is opening herself.. to him.. and will get shelter.. but slowly...steadily.. clearly... perfectly.. finally.. CARD - WEDDING BELLS BABY..

Slow and steady wins the race..

CAGE , FOLLOWED BY COURAGE , FOLLOWED BY CARD - 3 C

Originally posted by: sreekailas

Finallyy..aastha decided to open her heart..poor gal!! Due to d faulty mixture of d cement she used, d cracks on her heart revealed itself again..n she tried in vain to close it using her hands!!(dont think what kind of scene this is, i remembered such a scene frm richie rich, not d movie, d cartoon!!)
ever since aastha met shlok she felt like she's drowning..drowning into some deep bottomless lake..like a black hole, his love was attracting her towards it..she remembered dat she's scared of water..she's scared of depth..she got scared in d thought of being unable to breath..!!she weighed all these "facts" with d attraction her heart was developing to dive into d depths of water..but still,she slipped..unknowingly..she tried to withdraw her limbs, but his love pulled her more..n she drowned..4 a moment she thought its okay..but her brain sent alarms to her body..she felt lack of oxygen in her lungs..she struggled not to breathe n fill her lungs wid water..she felt like she would die if she doesnt gasp..but she couldn't..atlast..her diaphragm arched,lungs xpanded..she felt cold liquid rushing into her lungs..it was her death... Mistaken..she thought his love would be her death..she drowned in a breathable liquid..now she's away frm d unreal world ..able to breathe..able to feel d warmth of shlok's love..feeling safe as she is in her mother's womb..feeling like a foetus..
I donno y i typed all these..but i feel lyk dis is aastha's life!!

Originally posted by: priya_avi

Cliffhanger...
Anu...where r u...?
Pls comeback n let her talk with my shlokie...who's life is like a cliffhanger after meeting his angel...poor thing didnt sleep till 2.30...

Finally this gal let her heart betray her mind for god sake...
But she needs someone to let her kno what happened in her past is no way related to her and her future..some helping hand to guide her...friend??
But at the end she should b the ultimate reason for whatever decision she make..

Its really awesome anu...loved it...
Hope ur mil is fine...

Originally posted by: bm11

Anu, sorry for the missed comment yesterday.

Pretty busy these days, dear, but your story is my first concern.

It's just marvellous, so many hidden meanings and desires. I feel goose-skin😳

Tenderness and the desire to touch are the first sings always.

It's just can't be otherwise and you showed it perfectly.👏

But Anu...😡 where is the promised kiss???😡😡😡

I waited till the end and... there was one fat "No, Jane, you obsessed creature"

Why are you doing this to me? To all of us?😭

However, no matter what tortutres you plan to impose on us I will read.

and I still believe in the man😆

Anu, 👍🏼

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

Cliffhanger... how can u end this update with the first hinted confession of Aastha? :0 loved how she is constantly thinking about him and how she needs to talk to him. She finally starts thinking about herself like that she too deserves happiness and the fears she thought of were understandable what if she wasn't accepted by his family?

Good going pls continue soon :*