ASHLOK FF - AT FIRST SIGHT Last Chapter - Page 55

Originally posted by: deepavasudev

Hi jane,

Nice comments..

Anu...we asked u for a kiss...u compensated with two kisses in hands...k never mind...

Bcoz its a really beautiful update...she found solace in him...letting her wounds heal...and the ultimate reason is my shlokie boy...he s adorable...n liked how he concerned about her n denied to meet her in mor...but was standing right infront of her...*love effect* cant wait to meet her...n the tear drop...can understand about what was she thinking...poor soul...
K tell me...next meet...shlok confession...astha emo breakdown...is it...
Waiting...Waiting..

Thank u anu for the update n pm...

Anu amazing update they are both so sweet and Innocent, he is so thought I like how he went to take her home even thought he knew he won't go inside it's nice to see him care for her so much he is such a gentlemen, finally she slowly getting the idea that he will be there for her and truly does lover her

Awesome update anu...

That was awesome...can't wait for their next meeting.

Originally posted by: bobbiedhillon

Very nice update...please continue

Originally posted by: sreekailas

awww..ur son is really cute..crowned little prince..n his name is ved?! Now i underdtand y u were using d same name again n agsin for ashlok baby!!

Originally posted by: sreekailas

thank u so much..im really honoured..thank u very very much

Originally posted by: sreekailas

omg!! Are u planning to kill me?! My heart is beating harder than ever in happiness..n u compared me wid jane?! Oh god!!anju kailas-terminated!!

Originally posted by: sathuraj

Lovely update Anu...

Wow... the way u described Astha feeling was mind blowing...

The way she was battling with her mind and heart... Poor Astha really had a very bad experience in her past... Hope shlok give her all the happiness she missed ...Shlok is so caring and kind hearted...

At last Astha won the battle...amazing... and decided to call Shlok even without thinking abt the time... so Sweet... lets she have the courage to express her feeling to Shlok...

Anu you r a great poet... I just loved the poem very much... A big hug to you dear...

The way u describe each and every little things r just mind blowing...

keep writing more...