ASHLOK FF - AT FIRST SIGHT Last Chapter - Page 52

Originally posted by: lachii

well i don't know abt ashlok, but i can't wait till tomorrow...any chance you give another update😳

Originally posted by: rbb1

Wow Anu amazing update thank you, it's nice that she called him I wonder what she will say to him

Originally posted by: Anunilmini

I'm still running the dialogues in my head. But it's all good. It's happening... It's started.

Thanks ray. As always taking the time to read and comment. Much appreciated.

no need to thank me, I should thank you for posting a really nice story

CARD, CAGE AND COURAGE ...

CAGE :

I was green and my beaks were red , my flying wings and feathers were cut.. when I was not even 6 months..I was asked to do the Monkey job oh sorry the TOTHA JOB.. oh sorry the PUPPET JOB..

I wanted to fly high in the sky.. some thing was snatched.. by my own.. or so called own..

I wanted to touch the sky.. flying like a bird.. but my own guilt .. or my happy but short lived future with two fruits in hand.. with a word called commitment..

MY FREEDOM - snatched at a very young age and again committed because of situations in a cage..

Like a bird.. whose hands and legs are tied.. expecting a day.. to come.. SO I CAN FLY AND BREATHE FRESH...

COURAGE :

No... I think.. I just need to MUSTER SOME COURAGE.. IM NO MORE THE PARROT IN CAGE ..

CARD :

I did.. muster the courage .. and finally... spoke to him.. yes..HIM.. the Mr.MCP.. is he so.. I don't think so. . he should be called the Mr.SSP.. - SOFT AND SENSITIVE PERSONALITY.. having a PMA..- Positive mental Attitude... I think.. it will take some time.. so I will also and he will also.. TOGETHER.. WE UNDERSATND.. US AND OURS US ( AS OF NOW ) AND OURS - MY FUTURE FAMILY..

The card.. YES.. the Invitation card...

On this day.. at this ..Church.. Shlok and Astha.. are becoming one.. in the matrimonial bond.. blessed by all Gods..

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All these happen in a dream.. The situation is .. Where Astha.. is in night shift.. and she dozes of for some time in mid..say... 50 mins.. The thoughts of past some hour.. kept on thinking..it has become a dream.. where her.. confused and flying.. fluttering mind.. makes her think .. from the past to the future ... with a PROSPECT of POSITIVITY.. THAT she will have him.. as HUBBY..

Yes... she is TAKING A STEP FORWARD.. BUT ...ONE STEP AT A TIME..

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Anu.. this is what I could write on your chapter..

She is the bird in cage.. She did muster her courage to her own Freedom.. on the process.. Confused lil bit.. but positivity is all thru her actions.. of phone calls.. or her inner mind fight.. and finally calling him.. for " NOT NOTHIN ".. it starts with hi.. I will disconnect.. later.. HEY NOT NO.. NOT NOW.. LET US TALK.. So she is opening herself.. to him.. and will get shelter.. but slowly...steadily.. clearly... perfectly.. finally.. CARD - WEDDING BELLS BABY..

Slow and steady wins the race..

CAGE , FOLLOWED BY COURAGE , FOLLOWED BY CARD - 3 C'S.

Finallyy..aastha decided to open her heart..poor gal!! Due to d faulty mixture of d cement she used, d cracks on her heart revealed itself again..n she tried in vain to close it using her hands!!(dont think what kind of scene this is, i remembered such a scene frm richie rich, not d movie, d cartoon!!)
ever since aastha met shlok she felt like she's drowning..drowning into some deep bottomless lake..like a black hole, his love was attracting her towards it..she remembered dat she's scared of water..she's scared of depth..she got scared in d thought of being unable to breath..!!she weighed all these "facts" with d attraction her heart was developing to dive into d depths of water..but still,she slipped..unknowingly..she tried to withdraw her limbs, but his love pulled her more..n she drowned..4 a moment she thought its okay..but her brain sent alarms to her body..she felt lack of oxygen in her lungs..she struggled not to breathe n fill her lungs wid water..she felt like she would die if she doesnt gasp..but she couldn't..atlast..her diaphragm arched,lungs xpanded..she felt cold liquid rushing into her lungs..it was her death... Mistaken..she thought his love would be her death..she drowned in a breathable liquid..now she's away frm d unreal world ..able to breathe..able to feel d warmth of shlok's love..feeling safe as she is in her mother's womb..feeling like a foetus..
I donno y i typed all these..but i feel lyk dis is aastha's life!!

Err..i started wid some tng n then lost my track..now i cant edit what i've written since im on my phone..sorry 4 dat

Deepa..loved ur response..n d way u compared aastha to a caged bird..brilliant..

Originally posted by: sreekailas

Finallyy..aastha decided to open her heart..poor gal!! Due to d faulty mixture of d cement she used, d cracks on her heart revealed itself again..n she tried in vain to close it using her hands!!(dont think what kind of scene this is, i remembered such a scene frm richie rich, not d movie, d cartoon!!)
ever since aastha met shlok she felt like she's drowning..drowning into some deep bottomless lake..like a black hole, his love was attracting her towards it..she remembered dat she's scared of water..she's scared of depth..she got scared in d thought of being unable to breath..!!she weighed all these "facts" with d attraction her heart was developing to dive into d depths of water..but still,she slipped..unknowingly..she tried to withdraw her limbs, but his love pulled her more..n she drowned..4 a moment she thought its okay..but her brain sent alarms to her body..she felt lack of oxygen in her lungs..she struggled not to breathe n fill her lungs wid water..she felt like she would die if she doesnt gasp..but she couldn't..atlast..her diaphragm arched,lungs xpanded..she felt cold liquid rushing into her lungs..it was her death... Mistaken..she thought his love would be her death..she drowned in a breathable liquid..now she's away frm d unreal world ..able to breathe..able to feel d warmth of shlok's love..feeling safe as she is in her mother's womb..feeling like a foetus..
I donno y i typed all these..but i feel lyk dis is aastha's life!!

ANJU,
Wow.. what an amazing thought.. i feel you should start writing.. your level of comparison and usage of metaphors.. etc.. pls start writing...

Rgds
Deepa

Originally posted by: sreekailas

Deepa..loved ur response..n d way u compared aastha to a caged bird..brilliant..

thanks honey... hey.. the picture in Apple Junir.. it is little Ved..mine..

Cliffhanger...
Anu...where r u...?
Pls comeback n let her talk with my shlokie...who's life is like a cliffhanger after meeting his angel...poor thing didnt sleep till 2.30...

Finally this gal let her heart betray her mind for god sake...
But she needs someone to let her kno what happened in her past is no way related to her and her future..some helping hand to guide her...friend??
But at the end she should b the ultimate reason for whatever decision she make..

Its really awesome anu...loved it...
Hope ur mil is fine...