ASHLOK FF - AT FIRST SIGHT Last Chapter - Page 17

Good dear lord!! U r too fast!! Im sorry..its me who is late!!
Coming to ur updates, d one in which aastha's past is revealed, i cant xplain what i felt while reading dat chapter.. It was literally numb..was having some strange sensations all over my body.. May be it was fear or utter disgust.. Ya..both..i cannot even imagine such a situation.. Donno if every girl who dreams of a prince charmung get one, but every girl who is born on god's green earth is blessed 2 hav a king, her super hero father..who gave her life n will protect her from all miseries of her life n keep her like a gem..but here dis poor innocent girl aastha is doomed to have d worst..d worst tng dat ant girlwouldhav to face..a father..step father..still father..who.. Err..im a girl who watches programs lyk sathyamev jayathe n burst into tears..!!im sorry..all i wantedto say was dat d chaper was soo touching n emotional..hats off to u anu di..n rest of d chapters were also brilliant...

Originally posted by: ArVi-licious

This forum is blessed with so many wonderful n talented writers, I'm so glad I found your work, read all 7 chapters at once, touching story of how Astha has crossed her obstacles n become a doctor n taking care of children too.. Waiting for your next update.. Thank u!

Originally posted by: sreekailas

Good dear lord!! U r too fast!! Im sorry..its me who is late!!
Coming to ur updates, d one in which aastha's past is revealed, i cant xplain what i felt while reading dat chapter.. It was literally numb..was having some strange sensations all over my body.. May be it was fear or utter disgust.. Ya..both..i cannot even imagine such a situation.. Donno if every girl who dreams of a prince charmung get one, but every girl who is born on god's green earth is blessed 2 hav a king, her super hero father..who gave her life n will protect her from all miseries of her life n keep her like a gem..but here dis poor innocent girl aastha is doomed to have d worst..d worst tng dat ant girlwouldhav to face..a father..step father..still father..who.. Err..im a girl who watches programs lyk sathyamev jayathe n burst into tears..!!im sorry..all i wantedto say was dat d chaper was soo touching n emotional..hats off to u anu di..n rest of d chapters were also brilliant...

Originally posted by: Anunilmini

Hey my lil one! It's ok. I know your busy with sorting out your future. Glad that you liked the chapters. And for a young girl it's extremely sensitive matter. Sorry to have made your heart bit heavy. But things will look up. Have no fear Shlok is here. He'll try to help her. Do keep reading and love your deep thoughts lil one. You have very mature way of thinking. Don't grow up soo fast. Just kidding. Stay just the way you are.

u found my thoughts mature!!u r d first 1 who said me dat!! A biggg thank u 4 dat!!.. N i guess shlok will have to take much efforts to know her n heal her wounds r8?! Looking 4ward to see how will he he act lyk d angel of his angel's life..

Originally posted by: sreekailas

u found my thoughts mature!!u r d first 1 who said me dat!! A biggg thank u 4 dat!!.. N i guess shlok will have to take much efforts to know her n heal her wounds r8?! Looking 4ward to see how will he he act lyk d angel of his angel's life..

Awesome update dear.
Loving the flow of the story.
Tfd pm. 😊

Originally posted by: athmi

Awesome update dear.
Loving the flow of the story.
Tfd pm. 😊

Originally posted by: Anunilmini

Thanks Athmi. So is it only you that's getting my pms.

I got your pm for the 6th chapter not for the 7th one.

Originally posted by: Anunilmini

Thank you Ray. He's got it bad. He just doesn't know how bad...😉

lol yeah true let's see what he does

Originally posted by: ArVi-licious

This forum is blessed with so many wonderful n talented writers, I'm so glad I found your work, read all 7 chapters at once, touching story of how Astha has crossed her obstacles n become a doctor n taking care of children too.. Waiting for your next update.. Thank u!

agree we have some amazing writers here