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Sg2013

@Sg2013

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#141

You write very well. Beautiful depiction of emotions.

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@rbb1

Elite

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#142

Another amazing update thank you aww he is dreaming about Astha how sweet

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niki795

@niki795

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#143

Part5

Felt bad for astha

Nice update

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priya

@Priya_ShrAvi

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#144

Part 4
Oh no its horrible what astha gone through..!!but ur absolutely right...at the small age victims always hide abuse from others and they think it as a shame..lack of knowledge fear ...hats off to u to pick this sensitive plot...which is the hard reality and thousands of young girls going through this...am feeling touched!!
Lovely update yaar..

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priya

@Priya_ShrAvi

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#145

Chapter5
Again its a awesome intense one...
Wonder astha ever met any nice people around her...as that's father married kalindi only for name sake...and another one she found herself for solace...not only betrayed and killed her but also ruined her only daughter life...what's must be astha going through...where is her saviour???shlok...
I must say ur handling this sensitive issue with so much maturity and reality!!

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: ashlok
thank u for giving such a good update
well written dear
i loved it dear
an awesome update
i loved it dear
still some mystries r around aastha
i hope aastha will get a pure love from shlok

Thank you so much for the lovely comments. Just one with regard to her kids. That's about it. After that it'll be ashlok. She deserves it. And who better than to give it to her our Shlok. Will she accept it?

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: mehare
Nice update like it

Thanks mehare! Glad your enjoying it,

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: drafsul
Wow didn't realise u had updated also ... gonna read now ... will comment then 😃

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: drafsul

ur most welcome dear ... its a pleasure reading ur ff ... I must say its a unique one soo far with a very different concept ... thanx fr da explanation 😊

It's my pleasure. Really glad your enjoying the somewhat unexplored concept. Love reading your comments. Keep them coming.

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: drafsul
Alright dat was heartbreaking ... poor poor aastha 😭 ... can't believe dat psycho killed her mom and then himself 🤢 ... loved da 7th chapter ... really excited as to how shlok is gonna break all those walls around her ... really like ur unique concept ... well I am having another query now ... as far as I have known for a molested and raped person its very difficult to be intimate ever again ... so is aastha also gonna suffer from dat problem ... infact its so bad for some ppl dat they can't bear to be touched ... wt should cause pleasure causes them pain ... wouls love to see how shlok would handle dat if she does have this problem ... will be waiting for da next update 😊

He didn't deserve to breath the same air. He's got a Herculean task. But I'm sure he's willing and upto it. But the question remains does she want anybody to break through those walls? She is no different, remember I mentioned earlier that she does not even like to be hugged by her male friends. She feels suffocated. That's something else who ever is brave enough to love her will have to counter.but for all of this to happen she herself needs to be willing to be loved.

Shlok sure has his plate full. His patients will be tested...

Thank you! One e agin for your interest and for the wonderful comments. BTW Would like to know your name.