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deepavv

@deepavv

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

hi,

read your story.. It is very good..

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: Aishaa3
Chapter 6
woow the letter👏the beauty of the words is spell binding! her mom is so right in telling her not to hold any grudges..she always knew astha would have to face hardships without her and regret after her..Kalindi's character is respect-worthy😊 I am short of words😕 I dont know what held you back and made underestimate yourself for soo long!

chapter 7

I have started to blush already imagining Shlok staring at Astha without hesitation😆Looks like he doesnt require meds but only Asthas presence😉 Astha is surely kanphuzed with her patient's behavior as hers! its cute how the two have struck a chord😳

thank you for this story...⭐️

All the amazing writers, including yours truly! That's what held me back. Still not convinced. But thank you Aishaa for those wonderful words. I'm really glad to see you feel for my characters. I say once again, you really have a very vivid imagination.

That's gonna be such a big challenge for me. I'm not a romantic person at all. So my thinking is also very bland. Let's see. But astha needs to be pampered and treated like a queen. I'm sure Shlok is, it's me I'm having all the doubts on. I just read meerabs latest update. And I'm.blown away. May be I should borrow that Shlok. He's so romantic.

Thanks lovely Aishaa for the wonderful feed back. Keep them coming. Is me kick hai!

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: deepavv
hi,

read your story.. It is very good..

Hi, deepa, thank you for reading the story and commenting, keep reading.

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Aishwarya

@Aishaa3

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: Anulinmini
All the amazing writers, including yours truly! That's what held me back. Still not convinced. But thank you Aishaa for those wonderful words. I'm really glad to see you feel for my characters. I say once again, you really have a very vivid imagination. Thank you😆
That's gonna be such a big challenge for me. I'm not a romantic person at all.thought you were reading from your comments on Aparna's stories😛 So my thinking is also very bland. Let's see. But astha needs to be pampered and treated like a queen. I'm sure Shlok is, it's me I'm having all the doubts on.Lol I know that feeling..get used to it! Readers are going to pamper you a lot😃 I just read meerabs latest update. And I'm.blown away. May be I should borrow that Shlok. He's so romantic.Haha i now right but the "angel in heaven" shlok isnt bad too😉

Thanks lovely Aishaa for the wonderful feed back. Keep them coming. Is me kick hai!
I can see you are inspired by the film😆dont worry u will never fall short of the kicks😆😆

Edited by Aishaa3 - 11 years ago

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: Aishaa3

I wasn't being romantic, I was being blown away by her characters, by her writing skills. It was me reacting. I should revisit my comments. Thank you aishaa anyways for the compliment,

I can get used to pampering. I'm ready and willing.

My Shlok is a really good guy. But I need to give him the proper armour before I send him off to the battlefield. "Operation Angel eyes" is still in its strategy level. It will be put into action soon.

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: Serviana
Keep them coming dear!🤗

Will do Yasna. Couldn't update yesterday. My son is not well. He's a real drama king, wants my constant attention. When he's down he's really down. My girl isn't like that. Even with high fever she'll be running and playing. Anyways thank you for reading and commenting. 😊

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@rbb1

Elite

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: Anunilmini

Will do Yasna. Couldn't update yesterday. My son is not well. He's a real drama king, wants my constant attention. When he's down he's really down. My girl isn't like that. Even with high fever she'll be running and playing. Anyways thank you for reading and commenting.😊

aww hope your son gets better soon

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: rbb1
aww hope your son gets better soon

Thanks ray! He's much better today. Anyways have put an appointment with the doc in the evening. Will post the next cheater in a bit.

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@rbb1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: Anunilmini

Thanks ray! He's much better today. Anyways have put an appointment with the doc in the evening. Will post the next cheater in a bit.

ok thanks