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@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: meerab...
Just read all the parts...omg you are totally a brilliant and perfect writer anu👏...u know how to keep ur readers interest alive in the story👏...every chapter was great⭐️...but the later ones were sooo emotional😭...

Liked ur unique concept⭐️...u have selected a very sensitive issue...hats off for that👏...
Loved astha and her twin daughters😳😳😳...want to know abt their past story tooo like kalindi's😕...
Felt sooo bad for astha and her mother😭...
But loving ashlok's unknown connection😳...
Eagerly waiting for ashlok lovestory😛😛😛...hope shlok helps her to overcome the troubles her past's bad experiences will create in her future life😒...

Thanks meerab for taking the time to read and giving me such a wonderful feedback. I'm truly touched by your sweet words. Was bit skeptical about the subject matter. But all have loved it. I'm elated.

I'm I a way living my dream of having twin girls through this fiction. Have always wanted to have twin girls myself. But god has been kind enough to give me one. I'm happy. Their story will be revealed soon.

Even I'm eagerly waiting to unfold their emotional connection, thief emotional relationship.

Thanks you once again for the encouragement. Means a lot coming from you.

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: bobbiedhillon
Liked it very much...let's see how they express their feelings.

Thank you bobbie. Yes, now the fun starts... Keep reading.

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: DJakaDesiJames
Ah that chemistry is slowly building up eh? Get that going I say. I can already feel the steam...c'mon go for it I say 😆. Shlokie is in hosp so the tiger is tamed..just let him come out and then we will see Shlokie unleashed 😆😆. Jokes apart, this was the best update amongst all the 6 chapters..the Agnihotri family time was just so touching and awesome. New writer on the block, our pro Anu, pat on your back 😊.

Well I have been trained by the very best. 😉

But aparna, there ain't gonna be anything remotely close to your write ups. Fifty ain't gonna be upstaged. Not ever. Glad your enjoying the buildup. It's just the story ...not the steam. Steam is all with you. But I have read when a tiger that's been held is let loose he goes bonkers sometime,

I'm just saying. Glad you like the bonding between agnis. I liked it too. Not a pro. Long way to go. But will take your compliment with glad.

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: Sg2013
You write very well. Beautiful depiction of emotions.

Thank you so much for the compliment. I'm trying.. Writing emotions is not my thing, I can be funny...not romantic and emotional. But nice to see you liking what ever emotions I'm putting forward.

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: rbb1
Another amazing update thank you aww he is dreaming about Astha how sweet

Thank you Ray. He's got it bad. He just doesn't know how bad...😉

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: niki795
Part5
Felt bad for astha
Nice update

She's a fighter. So she's survived the storm. Now she needs to rebuild her life. She's half way done.

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: niki795
Part6
Nice update

Thank you niki😊

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: priya_avi
Part 4
Oh no its horrible what astha gone through..!!but ur absolutely right...at the small age victims always hide abuse from others and they think it as a shame..lack of knowledge fear ...hats off to u to pick this sensitive plot...which is the hard reality and thousands of young girls going through this...am feeling touched!!
Lovely update yaar..

Wasn't sure how it'll be liked by the readers. But I'm glad many have embraced it. And have understood asthas point of view. Yes, the stats are alarming and to read that most of the time the abuser is a family member or someone known to you. How do you counter that?

Thank you priya for the keen interest in the story's. Enjoy the story.

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ArVi-licious

@ArVi-licious

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#159

This forum is blessed with so many wonderful n talented writers, I'm so glad I found your work, read all 7 chapters at once, touching story of how Astha has crossed her obstacles n become a doctor n taking care of children too.. Waiting for your next update.. Thank u!

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: priya_avi
Chapter5
Again its a awesome intense one...
Wonder astha ever met any nice people around her...as that's father married kalindi only for name sake...and another one she found herself for solace...not only betrayed and killed her but also ruined her only daughter life...what's must be astha going through...where is her saviour???shlok...
I must say ur handling this sensitive issue with so much maturity and reality!!

She's been hell and back. People around her don't knew her past at all. Her friends knew about her mothers death that's was it. She's keeping it all in. Yes! Shlok is her knight in shining armour, he wants to be. But does she want to be saved.?

I kept the details to minimal. Only what was needed was written, I didn't want to glorify it or make it seem like it's not a big deal. Thanks for your support. Means much to me, do keep reading and Commenting.

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