OS after march 13th episode, my imagination.updated part2-3; part3-5

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Haap1234

@Haap1234

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

And this your first!! I'm impressed. Every part gets better and better. You must do more work. Loved the confession part. Straight to the point And very Convincing! Well thought of characters they stay true to their nature.You must do more work.

Edited by Haap1234 - 11 years ago

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Ashlesha

@SheWantsFanfic

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Beautiful beautiful ending. Just lovely confession by Shlok...you should continue dear..

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sonia

@lachii

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

it started shakily, at least i felt so, but since then it's been very enjpyable, loved it

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avi_ashi

@avi_ashi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

loved it., but I dont want u to end it here,.

plz continue..😳

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Wanted you to continue this further. But nevertheless loved the ending. I'm sure you'd come up with another fiction soon. Because you do have a knack for writing. Hope you'll continue with your writing. Thank you for taking the time for this. This is my song dedication ...hope you all will like it.

Starting over again by Natalie Cole

http://youtu.be/Yu0h_21BYLU