OS after march 13th episode, my imagination.updated part2-3; part3-5 - Page 5

Originally posted by: Pveenat

Very nice update, I liked the way Shlok confess to her. Loved it and do write more, you are awesome😛

Originally posted by: Haap1234

And this your first!! I'm impressed. Every part gets better and better. You must do more work. Loved the confession part. Straight to the point And very Convincing! Well thought of characters they stay true to their nature.You must do more work.

Originally posted by: lachii

it started shakily, at least i felt so, but since then it's been very enjpyable, loved it

Originally posted by: avi_ashi

loved it., but I dont want u to end it here,.

plz continue..😳

Originally posted by: Anukalu

Wanted you to continue this further. But nevertheless loved the ending. I'm sure you'd come up with another fiction soon. Because you do have a knack for writing. Hope you'll continue with your writing. Thank you for taking the time for this. This is my song dedication ...hope you all will like it.

Starting over again by Natalie Cole

Originally posted by: latha_555

loved it:)

Originally posted by: niki795

awesome ending
the confession part is lovely

Originally posted by: rbb1

really nice ending thank you finally Shlok realised how much he needs and loves Astha

Originally posted by: .SajnaVe.

Aww sooo goood awesome update

Originally posted by: Aishaa3

Ur fabulous😳 wow👏 so short n sweet..u put in the realisatn cnfession n forgivness👍🏼 do write anothr soon...may b smthng longer...an ff😃