Ashlok FF:~*~The PREDATOR..~*~.Chapter-13,page-62...

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[NOTE:Okay friends!Before u attempt to kill me🤢 for my craziness🤪!I am not continuing wid dis if u dnt want me to..😳And yes I owe u lots of updates..But plz,just undrstnd,dis story idea was gnawing my inside for days and had to take it out..Hope u undrstnd!😳Do leave ur feedbacks..I wnt continue if u dnt want me to..😛

Love u all!🤗

Tehsina(SINA)❤️..]


PROLOGUE:

Have you seen the fresh morning dew glitter like jewels on the green grass,lit up by the golden glow of the rising sun..?

I did..

Have you seen the waves splashing on the sandy beach,the roar of the sea,the palm trees swaying in the cool sea breeze..?

I have..

Have you smelt the wet soil and greens,after the first shower in summer..Have you seen the trees turn greener and rejoice the rain water..

I have..

Have you felt the drops of rain playing on your skin..?Have you tasted the rain water dancing in the rain to God's own music created by nature..?The music of the falling rain..?

I have..

Have you seen the moonlight playing on the river water at night,the hooting of the owl,deep at night,the fragrance of fresh jasmine,that only can be felt at night..

I have..

Have you..Seen the happiness on childrens' face..Their innocent face glowing in happiness at the simplest pleasure..?I have..

I am Astha Kirloskar and I love my life..I love Bappa for keeping me alive and well..I thank everyone around me,for just being with me..

It's true..I have a happy loving family back at Pune..My home..and I know my studies and now my job keeps me away from them..But I am happy I am alive..And happy to know,they will love me..No matter where I am..And what I do..They will be proud of me..

A small voice protested from the back of my mind..

They can't be proud in everything I do,it warned me..

But I was not ready to let go of my dream..Not yet..Not when I was so close..


Have you seen the world go by,while you stand steady..?

I have..

Have you seen the sun set,and cover the world in darkness..?

I have..

Have you seen the harsh sea water sweep away people's life..?

I have..

Have you seen people's house drown,diseases spread due to rain water..?

I have..

Have you drunk yourself to oblivion when the full moon covers the earth in its eerie light..?The pain and memories clawing at your senses..?

I have..

Have you seen children laugh and swing in the park,their parents gathered at the side,gossiping among themselves,while on the other side of the park,a child of similar age,begs for a piece of bread..?

I have..

Have you seen death from up close..?Looked at it in the eye,and faced it yourself..?

I have..

Yes I have lived my life..

And I am The Shlok Agnihotri..The business tycoon,who is renowned as The most eligible bachelor..

My friends and foes secretly call me The PREDATOR..

But little do they know how correct they are..

As I am Shlok Agnihotri..And I am in reality a murderer..

And I have already set my eyes on my next prey..


Chapter-1,page-11:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/102741114


Link to my Ashlok writings😈:

TehsinaJFJ's Ashlok Writng Index:Come Live The Love...: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/104169831



INDEX:-

Prologue:Above!😛

Chapter-1,page-11:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/102741114

Chapter-2,page-15:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/102905302

Chapter-3,page-19:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/102978866

Chapter-4,page-24:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/103176980

Chapter-5,page-28:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/103728700

Chapter-6,page-32:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/104169298

Chapter-7,page-36:/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon-ek-baar-phir/3941841/ashlok-ff-the-predator-chapter-13-page-62

Chapter-8,page-40:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/105310907

Chapter-9,page-45:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/105892164

Chapter-10,page-48:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/105943977

Chapter-11,page-52:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/108832773

Chapter-12,page-58:/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon-ek-baar-phir/3941841/ashlok-ff-the-predator-chapter-13-page-62

Chapter-13,page-62:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/114667060










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Pveenat thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome, looks interesting! Please continue😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Mmm nice prologue
BTW its rainin FF's HALLELUJAH 🤣
I'd say continue
Why would I say not
Also if you do continue you better not uodate the others more slowly 😡 😆
Continue if you can handle so many AaShlok stories 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The prolougue looks interesting .so shlok has set eyes on aastha😕😲
I want you to continue this story
But update it if u are able to manage other ffs.
I almost love all ur stories and ff.
Keep it up
And please update desire calls
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Love the prologue thanks wow another FF from you can't wait to read the updates
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Posted: 11 years ago
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plz carry on lokks interesting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omggg another ff!! 😆 😆 yipeee 😃 i just love reading your work even before reading the prologue i knew it was gonna be amazing 😛 seems like another unique story! The prologue seems really interesting and your writing skills are amazing so i know this is gnna be a great ff 👏 👏 ! Do continue 😊 btw still waiting for desire calls update!! 😛
Edited by xayeshax - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Really intriguing and captivating, but like others I want updates too but pls continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: xayeshax

Omggg another ff!! 😆 😆 yipeee 😃 i just love reading your work even before reading the prologue i knew it was gonna be amazing 😛 seems like another unique story! The prologue seems really interesting and your writing skills are amazing so i know this is gnna be a great ff 👏 👏 ! Do continue 😊 btw still waiting for desire calls update!! 😛

agree
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sounds good continue lets see how this ashlok story is

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