Ashlok FF:~*~The PREDATOR..~*~.Chapter-13,page-62... - Page 12

no way he left her alone in the rain

Very awesome update!! sorry for some reason missed your chapter 1 update, and got caught up on both chapters. Tremendously loved it - huge fan of how you describe the scenes and set them up with their unexpected twists.
Loved how you state shlok's thoughts about him being wolf in wolf's clothing (that i think is one of the most apt descriptions of him) and he ponders on how astha not recognizing this danger would be able to manage with the typical wolf in sheep's clothing - so brilliantly u bring it about 👏 & also love how you have Astha surprise Shlok in a good way - in addition to her beauty, her own actions as well takes him off guard as he mistook her being relaxed in his presence because of the underlying attraction, but she was so because her plan A was to use her cellphone to get help without Shlok realizing so to begin with.👏 Love the ashlok you have created and dont tone down the heat for you sure 👍🏼 Always look forward to all your work and cant wait for the next update.

this shlok is so unexpected

Beautiful Tehsina ! Loved it . You write well 👏

Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ

[NOTE:Thank u friends!Loved ur comments!🤗Nd m back wid another update..😉]

Chapter-1,page-11:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/102741114

CHAPTER-2.

Neither thunder nor lightning,nor the sunlight matter-

When you stand in front of him,your glass of protection shatter..

And when he breathes fire,and yet terror freezes you to ice-

Be aware that you cannot fool him,NOTHING escapes THE PREDATOR'S EYES..

Shlok walked closer to her,water dripping down his face to hers,as the storm went stronger than ever..

He could see her shiver,and a warmth of satisfaction settled in him,seeing her shiver in fear..

He liked her fear..Why won't he?When he survived on it?

He slowly raised his hand,and strangely she did not blink,again taking him aback..That was when he noticed her hand in her purse,as he could make out a small light..

"Calling someone?"He asked softly,making her jump in surprise,and the phone fell to the ground shattered to pieces.

Her gasp of surprise did not escape his notice,nor did her leaning backwards,in fear..

Shlok got closer to her,and with satisfaction watched her close her eyes in fear.

A smile teased the corner of his full lips,as thunder blared louder,and slowly he raised his hands towards her to do what he had intended to do in the first place.

Astha closed her eyes,her heart beating like anything,as she felt him coming closer..

She knew she should be calling for help,but how could she when He was looming over her like this,and also her only means of contact with the world lay shattered to pieces at her feet..

She could feel his hands coming nearer.Even with her eyes closed tight shut she could tell.Though she did not know how..

And just before his hands were about to touch her body,she opened her eyes ready to scream for help,even if no one heard..

The sound never escaped her lips,as to her shock and surprise she noticed him not touching her like she expected..But he was gently draping her dupatta round her body..

A shudder passed through her body,as his hand brushed at her arm..Slightly but clearly unintentionally this time..

And then to add to her surprise,he moved away and picked up the umbrella and offered it to her..

A glowing softness bloomed up in her heart at the act..

He was so noble and she thought him to be..

With shaky hands she took the umbrella,giving him a wavering grateful smile..

He walked under the umbrella,with her,nearly pushing her out with his huge physique,and took out his expensive blackberry from his pocket.

Astha frowned in confusion not able to understand what was about until he offered it to her..

Her eyes widened in surprise..

Was he giving her his mobile too?!!

"Call whoever you want to,ask them to pick you up right now.It's not safe here in this stormy night.Hurry!"His cold clipped voice shattered her dreamy rose colored glasses..

Heaving a sigh she took the phone from him,and made the call she was supposed to do..Her friend was supposed to pick her up from here,where she had come to give an interview.

"Hello?Yes where are you..?Yes I am Astha..Yes..Okay hurry I'm waiting..No..It's okay I..I have an umbrella.."She had done talking when instantly he took the phone from her and put in an inside pocket of his coat.

She was about to hold the umbrella which he was holding while she talked on the phone,when he raised his eyebrows questioningly at her,and her hand fell down back to her sides..

"The umbrella was to protect MY BLACKBERRY from the rain..Not for you..You are.."His eyes meaningfully studied her from head to toe,again lingering for a few seconds longer at her bosom,so that Astha again tried to cover herself up.."Alreay WET.."He put such an emphasize on the word wet,that she shivered at the double implication of the word.

It was while he suddenly turned and strode off with the umbrella leaving her alone and dripping wet in the thunder storm,that Astha finally realised the insult behind his words..

Anger took over her,as she realised what a fool she had been in misjudging him as a noble and polite man..!A scoundrel was what he was more like!She thought angrily..

And she applauded herself mentally for coming to that conclusion,as she watched him driving out of the parking lot in a huge black SUV,and splash water at her as he passed by..

"The bas***d!"She seethed out through clenched teeth,as she watched the tail lights of the car disappear down the road.

He could have easily offered her a ride,she thought fumingly as she waited for her friend to pick her up..

And I forgot about her after that..

The saying out of sight,out of mind,was made a genius I think..

She was another memory among my many other useless ones..

What did one traditional petite,small and too curvaceous girl for my taste,matter to me..?

I was The SHLOK AGNIHOTRI..

I had my choice among the sexiest and tallest girls of Mumbai..And even from other cities of India or the world, if I just bend a finger..

And everytime,I did bend it,they come crawling to please me..

WOMEN..They are sick!All that matters to them is money..Give them that and they will do anything for you..

And then I had another chance meeting with her..

And this one also dramatic like the last one..

Drama and my new prey seemed to be closely connected..Or was it me,who seemed to be finding too much in all of it..?

Anyways, so I had another chance meeting with HER the VERY NEXT DAY..

[NOTE:Thank u frnds!🤗]

Chapter-2,page-15:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/102905302

CHAPTER-3.

If he wants,he can make you soar in the open sky,

If he wants he can make you fall..

If you bump into him against his will,you will just crumble-

But The PREDATOR will always stand up tall..

The second meeting strangely took place in his office..

It was only yesterday he had first seen her,and he had already forgotten about her and the incident..

Shlok strode towards his office talking on phone..The entire office quietened when he entered,and each employee turned to stone when he was nearby..No one wanted to face the wrath of Shok Agnihotri..

He was lethal and dangerous in everything..

Once a female employee,a new arrival had made the mistake of laughing loudly while he was talking on phone,and then she was punished by him..

Her punishment was to keep on laughing for full ten minutes..

The girl had ended up in tears and had of course been kicked out..

But everyone tolerated his rudeness and arrogance at being able to work in the Agnihotri Industries was a privilege in itself..Everyone's dream job.A prestigious status among family and friends..

Only the top class and competent people worked here..

This was no place for unruly ,clumsy people..

Until Shlok bumped into the girl once again..

A soft squeak was followed by the falling of Shlok's blackberry onto the carpeted office floor,and flying of lose papers all around..

Shlok stood still for a few seconds,letting the flying papers settle to the ground and then looked with chilling cold eyes to the root of the problem..

He instantly narrowed his eyes as he noticed a tiny girl with a familiar face and long open hair staring daggers up at him..

He was just about to open his mouth to give her a piece of his mind,when she blasted out on him instead.

"YOU Again?!!Are you hounding me?!!And don't you have eyes?!Did you see what you just did?!"She snapped out angrily,as she lowered herself to gather the scattered papers.

Shlok clenched his jaw tight in anger,and he could see his employees murmuring to themselves at seeing him being told off by a mere scrap of a tiny girl..

Without thinking further,he pulled her up by one arm,nearly pulling the arm out of her joint,and her surprised yelp of pain had no effect on him..

He dragged her towards his office room,not listening to her protestations for letting her go too..

On entering his office he nearly threw her halfway across the huge room..The room was beautifully decorated with top to bottom glass windows on one side looking onto the Mumbai sky lines, a huge mahogany working table was placed on one side,and a large sitting area with Turkish carpet and dark colored sofa close by the glass windows..

Even the room gave an aura of evilness and darkness like the man himself,she thought angrily,as she tried to straighten herself.

She had just stood straight when she saw him locking the office door with a loud sure click,and suddenly she became very wary..

He was coming towards her now,with slow steady steps and Astha walked backwards nervously..

She kept on walking until she found she could not walk back further due to the hard wall behind her..

Before she could try to move away she was locked up in her position by his huge looming body infront of her,and his large arms on both sides of her body trapping her completely.

Her heart racing like a maddened thing she tried to look for a way out,looking at anything and everything but into his eyes..

She did not get a reprieve for much longer,as his one hand held her chin and forced her to meet his eyes.

"What did you just say?!"He gritted out in a cold menacing voice,his eyes burning with fury into hers..

"Whe-..When?"She stammered out in confusion.

"Out there!Do you know who you are exactly talking to?!"

"Yes..!"

"Tell me!"He hissed out,as he pushed his body harder against hers,making her very very uncomfortable.

"Wha-..What?!"She did not like the feel of his hard body against hers,and was getting truly nervous.

"Tell me you idiot!Who am I?!"He shook her by her shoulder angrily,almost rattling all her bones by the strong jerk.

That did it!Astha lost his temper right then and there!

"You want to know who you are?!Why?!Beside being a rude arrogant and blind bas***d are you suffering from amnesia too?!!Forgot who you are?!"She taunted angrily,and felt him go cold and rigid all over..

"YOU bloody BIT.." He was about to push his body more onto her,but was pushed back away from her,by a strong shove from Astha.

"DO NOT MAN HANDLE ME!!!JUST BECAUSE YOU ARE BIGGER IN SIZE THAN ME DOES NOT GIVE YOU THE RIGHT TO DO SO!!!"She warned him with fire in her eyes."And I do not care if you are the prime minister of India right now!Whoever you are, can file an assault case on you right now for trying to man handle me!So just STAY AWAY FROM ME!!!"She said in a threatening voice,and before Shlok could get out of his shock,she had unlocked the office door and banging it shut behind her had walked out..

After overcoming his shock and anger Shlok had finally laughed out loud..

His eyes glittered,when he thought about the insults she had thrown at him..

No one got away with insulting Shlok Agnihotri and nor would she..

She had to be taught a lesson.

A very good lesson..

So he planned for the next meeting with her..But first he had to find out what she was doing in here in the first place..And if she was working here,like he had guessed she was maybe one of the new recruits in the finance department.Then his first job was to ensure she could not leave the predator's den..No matter how hard she tried..

Shlok made a call..He needed to set the trap strongly around her..

Cause he had just found his new prey..

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your ashlok craziness is not over yet huh??😆

Yay!!! Updated! !
Ok, firstly I must say I love the fiery fiesty Astha who is warning Shlok not to manhandle her . Love it . Assertive and treating Astha is a rare species! !
Secondly...Shlok is creeping me out a Lil bit. Just a Lil bit.
I'm going to lock my windows now...
please update soon Di!

Originally posted by: Anusha16

your ashlok craziness is not over yet huh??😆

It'sa good thing for us..m 😆

So shlok is out fr preyng nw😲 continue soon!