Originally posted by: meerab...
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I just loved how u started your story...
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Thank u love!🤗Will be updating soon!😉
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Originally posted by: meerab...
Beautiful...
I just loved how u started your story...
Waiting for next update...
Originally posted by: meera.rajeev
My immediet reaction after reading the prologue was "what the fish ?" shlok aur murderer no ways! And am sure his next target is astha!! I so want to read the next update!
Originally posted by: preya_radev
prologue seems interesting do update the first part soon please
CHAPTER-1.
Fairy tales,blockbuster romantic movies,romance are not my cup of tea..
But when I met her first,it was nothing less than those..
A dramatic chance meeting..
A stormy night..Dark heavy clouds,loud thunder and heavy pouring rain..They all added up to the drama..
Shlok was walking out of the hotel,just finishing a meeting with some foreign clients..
An umbrella in his hand,he walked down the pavement sploshing rainwater around with his strong steady steps..
He hated the sound of it..The sound of rain was almost giving him a headache,and the thunder sound was adding more pain to it..
He would not have come at this God forsaken place if the client was not important..
He was just taking the turn,towards the parking lot,when a wet form came on his path,and squeaked out as she was about to slip.
The umbrella fell off his hand as he instantaneously reached out for her to hold her steady..
As he prevented the wet girl's fall,he cursed loudly as he realized he was now wet,due to the loss of his umbrella.
Irritated he let her go,and disgustedly he looked down at her..It was only for the rotten and stupid girl that he was all wet now in his black suit and shoes..
They were standing under a softly glowing street light at that moment,and all he could see was the top of her head,and her open hair hanging like rat tails around a face,that was still turned downwards and away from his view..But he could see her blue coloured kameez suit,and that gave him a clear idea of where she actually came from..A typical middle class girl..
He curled his upper lip in distaste..He hated this kind of downmarket girls..
He moved his hand further away from her,hating to be near her even for a second more..
He hated such-..
"Thank you so much..!I just slipped on that puddle.."She said softly,and looked up at him with a soft grateful smile,and glowing slanted eyes,and for a second he was shocked still..
There was something about the smile,the face that stunned him..Reluctantly he studied her creamy innocent face,and decided she was too innocent looking for his liking..
Thunder light lighted her features some more,and made him notice her full bottom lip and her wet clinging clothes to her petite curvaceous body,and he took in a sharp breath..
"I'm sorry that you got wet for me.."She mumbled apologetically,and leaned down to pick up his fallen umbrella off the road,clearly looking uncomfortable at his silent stare..
His dark brooding eyes studied her wet form..And as she bent down to pick up the umbrella,the view of her curved perfectly full derriere made his body tighten to his surprise..
He always bedded slim tall women,and she was nothing of the sort..So his body's odd reaction to her intrigued him,and perked up his interest..
Her reaction to his staring amused him too,as she tried to fix her dupatta,trying to cover up her assets,and he nearly chuckled out loud at that attempt..
He really wanted to ask her what she was trying to cover up,as her wet clinging dress clearly outlined all her assets,including the outline of everything she wore inside..
As she stumbled up to him with the umbrella extended in her hand,he could even see the tiny perked up peaks of her full bosom through her wet cloth..
His eyes glinted as his own manhood twitched at the sight..
He never got interested in such full figured girls..They always bored him,reminding him of that..He clenched his jaw tight at the unwanted flashback of that person he hated so much..
With shaky hands she held the umbrella upto him,and Shlok nearly smiled at how she avoided looking into his eyes even..
So he did make her uncomfortable,did he?
A few seconds passed as he let her stand just like that holding the umbrella..She deserved some punishment after all for making him wet in the God awful rain in the first place..
Just when she was hesitating and trying to move her extended hand away,he grabbed her hand..Surprising her to look up into his eyes..
He slowly moved his fingers on hers,lightly caressing them before he took the umbrella from her hand,making her shiver and look scared than ever..
He took a step towards her,and she instantly stepped back,now clearly uncomfortable at his odd behavior.
"You are welcome..And..Thank you for this.."He said pointing at the umbrella now in his hand,and watched her relax a bit.
Too nave he decided with irritation..
For all she knew he could be a rapist..
She nodded her head shakily,staring up at him with those wide innocent looking eyes,that made him conclude that she was also downright stupid along with being nave.
If she could not recognize the wolf in wolf's clothing,how was she going to save herself from the wolves in the society in sheep's clothing?!His upper lip curled slightly at distaste at her naivety ..
Standing there like that in that clinging outfit,in this stormy rainy night she was a prey for any of the hungry jackals that roamed the streets of Mumbai at late night..
Girls should be banned-..
She shivered as a gust of cold wind blew at them,and suddenly her dupatta got blown away and landed on his head..
Surprised beyond words he stared at her through the sheer material of the dupatta, now almost coloured red under the glowing street light,and flashes of thunder light,as she tried to cover her bodice up with her hands..
His manhood twitched again,as he took in the fullness of them now directly through her clinging kameez,devoid of the covering of her dupatta,which her small hands barely could cover up..
Slowly he removed the dupatta from his face,and watched her shiver again..
His eyes glinted as he noticed her nubs had hardened had some more,and unfortunately had not escaped the notice of his penetrating eyes,despite her attempts to do so..
Slowly he walked towards her,and she walked back..A game of the hunter and the hunted played many times in the history of humanity,until her back was trapped by a wall behind her..
The parking lot wall to be specific..And before she could move to the side and away from him,he trapped her there..His tall dark menacing figure looming over her small petite one,as she looked nervously up at him,her hands still covering her bosom..
Shlok let go of the umbrella in his one hand,and let it get blown away by the strong stormy wind..
She stood shocked still,as Shlok slowly removed her hands from her bodice,trapping them over her head,and looked down at the outline of her assets through the wet clingy kameez material..The material stretched on the fullness of her bosom,the hard nubs clearly visible to his burning eyes,and his body was now completely hard for her..
He looked up at her face,as she looked up at him with an odd light on them,and yet no sign of fear..
She had to be taught a lesson,he decided angrily,as he moved moved his body closer to hers..Almost touching hers but not quite.
His eyes glinting as he looked down at her wide eyes..Their bodies almost touching,as thunder split the sky apart and rain soaked them both to the skin..
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