Ashlok FF:~*~The PREDATOR..~*~.Chapter-13,page-62... - Page 5

Originally posted by: Aishaa3

Nice prologue..continue😳 bt plz dnt ignore ur othr stories..lv al of them:)

Thank u love!😃Yes bout my odr stories..I will keep updating..😉

Originally posted by: infernofyre

I'm not going to kill you. Well only if you keep writing amazing stuff you are safe! !! Another os flavour! !! Yippee you for this :)

😆Thank u for not killing me!😛Nd uh its a FF love,a long journey!😉Hope u enjoy it!

Originally posted by: sreekailas

wowww!!!just luv d way u introduced both of them!!u r awesome sina didi👏

Thank u so much sweet sis!🤗M actually a very bad person!😈See da way I leave u all at cliff hangers,and giv late updates!But I sure try to be good wid da updates atlst!😆

Originally posted by: lachii

aeee...that was my shriek...hehe...loving your stories...but like all others, i would say...no late updates please...the plot and intensity is lost tht way...

I know..Will try to mend my ways love!😳Thank u!

Originally posted by: TasrinS

Yaahoo...another ff.

Continue...I toh loved it.

Thank u so much!😃

Originally posted by: prabha75

nice

Thank u!😛

Originally posted by: Meilliures

Awesome prologue. Um waiting. .

Plz continue the story as soon as possible

Thank u!Will continue soon!😉

Originally posted by: payalparnitkaur

Awesome progloge. .plz continue

Thank u love!Will do for sure!😛

Originally posted by: naina..

Very nice prologue very nicely written
Gr8 contrast in the characters
One sees the sun set n the darkness dat follows and the other sees the bright moon light
One feels the harshness of sea water n the other hears the music the waves play... 😊
The first half reflected the lovely bright and pure side of the world, the way astha sees it
n
the second half showed the grey element of our society, faced by shlok ... 'a Balance is important' hope they come together n see the world in a different light, accepting the good n work to improve the not so good side... Will be looking forward to this story... 😊

Thank u so much!Glad u lykd it!Nd loved ur long comment more!🤗I love long comments!😃Kip dm cumn nd I'll kip updating fast!😉

Originally posted by: nakaja

Wow an awesome prologue
Plz do continue wid this

Thank u so much love!Will do for sure!😉