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Posted: 11 years ago
So hot update
Cannot wait
Bring the next update soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg astha is thinking shlok as the BIG BAD WOLF oh dat he is
shlok is saying it is his room nd astha says its her room whose room it is
bt wat will happen nw
do update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Poor Aastha...
Very nice updet dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
poor Astha..i wonder how there was a room mix up when she has come up to what she thot was her room...
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Posted: 11 years ago
what a brilliantly worded update!! the parallels to red hiding hood, big bad wolf and possible full moon were just hilarious!! wished your beautiful updated never ended as i devoured it in seconds 😛 The dialogues u have Shlok spouting are classic ... cant wait for more of your updates 👏
Edited by desikahani - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
really loved the update especially the beginning scene of ashlok astha was surely losing control...but then shlok became he usual self again... damn i never knew shlok would later tell astha to share the bed with him and poor astha as she banged her head and fainted do update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
[NOTE:Thank you friends for ur love and patience!I am back wid another update!😳]

Chapter-8,page-40:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/105310907


CHAPTER-9.

My dream my desire is a mystery to the world-

I am the jigsaw puzzle with pieces lost,since long..

Try to read me,and you will just lose your senses-

But I am The Predator that is the only right in all the wrong..

Astha felt her head throb like anything as she slowly opened her eyes..

Blinking as sunlight seeped in through the parted curtains.

Where was she?She wondered in still drowsy awareness of her strange and unknown surroundings..

That was when suddenly she realised she was in a short night shirt only..

The instant scream that rose in her throat immediately brought her new female colleague running upto her from inside the bathroom.

"ASTHA!!!WHAT HAPPENED?!!Are you in pain?!"Sweety exclaimed in worry as she tried to check her up,through the blanket that covered Astha.

Astha's eyes nearly bulged out at the sight of her,and tears of shame came to her eyes..

Sweety was also aware of her shameful position..!She must also be aware that she had spent the night in the same bed with the rotten disgusting man.

A reluctant sob was rising in her throat when Sweety noticed she was about to burst into tears..

"Astha?!!You look quite fine to me!Then why are you crying?!Is your head hurting?Shlok sir had brought you to my room after he found you unconscious at the passage outside your room..And then we also had called the doctor to check up on you..And I changed your clothes,so that-.."

"YOU changed my clothes?!"Astha interrupted her in astonishment.

"YES!Why?Who did you think would-.."

"No.It's nothing!"Astha startled Sweety with a sudden warm hug,as a laughter escaped her lips.

Astha later to her confusion learned that Shok Agnihotri,had after all saved her reputation..

He had not mentioned they were in the same room..

And to her utter shame and disgust,when she had checked with the reception,she had discovered that he was right all the time..

She had entered the wrong room by mistake..

Her room was the next one beside his..

And in her guilt stricken condition Astha did not once wonder how did she open his room with her key..

That thought was drowned by the realization that Shlok had always been correct and she was wrong..

But that did not give him the right to kiss her like that!She thought angrily as she strode to her proper room..

"UFF!"

"WHAAAT-.."

She stared up,still reeling from the collision she just had with a hard man physique.

She gulped as she stared up the broad shoulders in dark shirt and suit into a pair of familiar eyes..

"I am-..I'm sorry-.."

"Excuse me-.."He moved away and strode away from her,not bothering to give her a second look..

Astha was shocked at the act..

Shlok Agnihotri did not give her a piece of his mind!Now that was a first time..!

Astha smiled,or tried to give something that was close to it..

She should be happy should she not..?But oddly she did not liked to be ignored like that..

The rest of the day passed in a whirlwind for Astha and her team,as they got busy in the arrangement of the party,which started in the evening..

And all day Shlok Agnihotri avoided Astha..

And ofcourse Astha could not help but notice the ignorance..She knew she disliked the man,but still his act of not seeing her at all,somehow seemed to irk her..

So it was no wonder when during the party Astha dressed up with extra care in a sheer green shimmering saree..Her every creamy curve was hinted at by the saree that draped round her beautifully.

Her long hair blew silkily in the slight wind as she moved,and her long matching earings seemd to add more to her beauty..Her slanted eyes,were emphasized by dark kohl,and the the soft eye shadow and light blush seemed to emphasize her beauty more..

Amongst all the overly dressed guests and and party makers she stood out like a jewel..

But ofcouse Astha did not realize it as Shlok Agnihotri who was alos a guest in the party,being a friend of their client, had not passed her a single look..

The party went fine and was wrapped up by 1:00 am,and almost all guests had left..

Astha looked around for her two co-workers Sweety and Rohit around,but they seemed to be seen nowhere around..So tiredly she checked out the list of packing up stuffs she had to check out as ordered by her rude boss Sanjay Ahuja.

She grumbled to herself stifling another yawn,as she checked on the lists of packed decorations in the now empty party hallroom.

Suddenly almost all the lights went out,except a pair of corner lights..

Frowning Astha turned around,wondering what had happened,when she noticed a dark shadow coming towards her..

Her heart started beating fast,as fear suddenly took over her..

She was completely alone in the entire room,and everyone had either left or gone to sleep..

So who was this-..

"Finally I got you alone sweetheart..Let's have our own private party now..A real adult party.."The ugly sex dripping lecherous voice sent goosebumps running all over her body.But who was he-..

She did not have to wonder for long as light fell on the man's face..

She could not believe her eyes,as it was none other than her boss Sanjay Ahuja..And the ugly leer he was giving her turned her blood to water in terror..


Chapter-10,page-48:/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon-ek-baar-phir/3941841/ashlok-ff-the-predator-chapter-13-page-62





Edited by TehsinaJFJ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update Sinaaa👏👏 Hope Shlok comes to Astha's rescue😃 Sorry for late unres😉🤗
Edited by xayeshax - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
how dare he to touch her 😡...shloky where are you?...come rescue your sweet heart...and this update cleared some doubts...until now i thought shloky kidnapped her and detained her in a lonely house 😆...nice update sina
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Posted: 11 years ago
So d predator is tryng to show himself good😉 surely shlok wl save hr frm dat ahuja hope its nt a play! c.s:)

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