Ashlok OS ~ For YOU! Update Pg. 7 (23/02/14) - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Bharti that was amazing babes. 🤗
It's like sad but romantic, because whatever he did it was for her, or so he thought.
I don't know if he was getting a death sentence for his own deeds or for someone elses, but him thinking this was the best for her was so wrong. I like how Shlok is flawed here, he had his way of thinking and that's probably why he didn't rebel and tried appealing for a lifetime imprisonment or retrial instead. Sigh, if only.
I love the way you write love stories Bharti..Take Me is my favourite, but this one touuches your heart too. It's lovely as always, you go girl. 😳

Love,
Zah.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
Amazing dear...ur story z soo beautiful
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Posted: 12 years ago
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woow this is superb yaar
loved it
whatsss nexttt
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
so sad story but well written.
Posted: 12 years ago
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It's really amazing buddy!!
I loved and enjoyed the update a lot!!
But why Shlok is behind bars and all?
Continue soon.
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey tis is amazing...
its so heart touching..
it so beautifull n lovely...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Myra.nelly

Tell me he is in jail bcoz he broke that annoying SIL's neck!!! 😆

very nicely written! enjoyed reading! 😊

Yes...You are right 😆
thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Priya01

Simply beautiful and heart wrenching

Y is Shlok in jail????
So he is dying for his Astha and the latter ll live for him n their child
Plzz do continue soon


Thank you soo much Priya 😃
you have to read the next one part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: CavingIn

That was some seriously good angst over there. Poignantly done Bharthi. There was small grammatical errors but the feel of the story wasn't compromised.

Waiting to know why Shlok is in jail and more.
Regards
Nidha


Thank you so much 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..-AsYa-..

Beautifully written...but Shlok's death is sad..I wish the story ended happily..

Thank you😃

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