Ashlok OS ~ For YOU! Update Pg. 7 (23/02/14) - Page 4

Originally posted by: Humsafar.

Bharti that was amazing babes. 🤗
It's like sad but romantic, because whatever he did it was for her, or so he thought.
I don't know if he was getting a death sentence for his own deeds or for someone elses, but him thinking this was the best for her was so wrong. I like how Shlok is flawed here, he had his way of thinking and that's probably why he didn't rebel and tried appealing for a lifetime imprisonment or retrial instead. Sigh, if only.
I love the way you write love stories Bharti..Take Me is my favourite, but this one touuches your heart too. It's lovely as always, you go girl. 😳

Love,
Zah.

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra

Amazing dear...ur story z soo beautiful

Originally posted by: veenisha

woow this is superb yaar

loved it

whatsss nexttt

Originally posted by: poonam.vijay62

so sad story but well written.

Originally posted by: dmegha

It's really amazing buddy!!

I loved and enjoyed the update a lot!!

But why Shlok is behind bars and all?

Continue soon.

Thanks for the PM.

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

hey tis is amazing...

its so heart touching..

it so beautifull n lovely...

thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

Hey bharti :)

Nice OS
A sad one though..
Shlok the intense lover

Hey bharti u've written he was in jail since one year ..nd astha is 8 mnths pregnant ..do check it once

Awesome till now

Cont soon :)

Originally posted by: sweetshab

Hey bharti :)

Nice OS
A sad one though..
Shlok the intense lover

Hey bharti u've written he was in jail since one year ..nd astha is 8 mnths pregnant ..do check it once

Awesome till now

Cont soon :)

y sad OS??

Originally posted by: Missvishtoofani

y sad OS??

Hahaha kk i lov it

its beautifully written😆