Ashlok OS ~ For YOU! Update Pg. 7 (23/02/14)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Helloo, Hi lovely peoples!

I am Bharti, well maybe u know me or not...don't know but don't worry I won't give a lamba speech just a short one😉
I have am writing on KaSh, ArHi, AsYa and know I will try my hand on Ashlok to.😃
This is a two shot so don't worry it won't be a long story just two parts
so here is the first part! But it is a sad story!!!!
PS: I am ready to take all the sandals and tomato's on me
~~~Bharti~~~
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Posted: 12 years ago
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For YOU!

Part 1

Today the sun wasn't shining like it used to, it was hiding behind the dark clouds. The wind was blowing and it started raining very hard. A man was sitting in a very dark room, not room it was a jail, he was behind the bars but still he had a smile on his face. A smile that could stole every girls heart and a his eyes were very peaceful, he was enjoying the rain that was falling on the hard ground and was making a very sweet music. Who could say that this will be the last day when he will see the rain, the four walls of the cell and who could say that the man will die the next day. He will be hang till death but still he was smiling not even once he let the sadness touch his face or his heart. This stang man was none other than Shlok Agnihotri, THE SHLOK AGNIHOTRI, once he was a full of arrogance, anger and attitude. But today he was a simple man, that has nothing but a smile and a calmness that no one can snatch it, not even death. Since eight months he is there in the jail and not even once he regret it to be there because he knew that his life was safe and living somewhere "Astha" this was the name of his life, of his heartbeats and breaths.


Shlok's POV.

Today is the last day of my life and still I feel very calm, I am not scared that I will die tomorrow but somewhere I feel bad for leaving her, my Astha, my wife. The best thing is that she is pregnant with my child, my baby, ohh god I was never so happy then before but she had the power to melt my icy heart with her warmth of love. Deep in my heart I feel sad that I will never see my baby born or I would never hold her or him in my hands, I won't be there when my child will be born in this world and I won't be there when my child will talk the first time or when my baby will walk his or her first steps but I am happy that a part of me will still live in this world and the part will take care of my Astha. I always get a smile whenever I think about my wife and her baby bump, she looks like a child and she will be a mother soon, I bet everyone will think that she is a very young mother like 16 years old and I so wished to see her face when the doctor would have asked her if she is a under age or not but I guess I have to wait for another life to be with them. Hahahaha Astha and her cute antics, I will miss her. Since six months I haven't seen her, it was not her fault but mine, the day she told me that she is two months pregnant, the day I told her not to come here again and meet me. I still remember how she cried and how she pleaded not to do that but I made her promise to never see my face again till I am alive and tomorrow is the day when everything will come to the end. But I can never forget the day when I met my Astha the first time.


Flashback

My family and I went to see my future wife, but I was never interested to marry anyone, but my family forced me to meet the girl. I was not paying attention on what my parents or the family of the girl and then they called the girl and automatically my eyes followed the direction from where she should come. After waiting two minutes a girl came but I could guess, no not guess I knew it that she was not the one but then a girl walked behind her and her payals making a very sweet music that was melting my icy heart and then it stroked me. I saw her, my heart missed a beat, I don't know what was happening to me or why I can't take me eyes of her. I saw many girls, many models but something on her made me stare at her like an idiot,OMG she came down and was just some meters away from me. My heart was jumping in happiness but still I don't know why she was making me happy without doing anything, she took the blessings from my mom and dad and then set down opposite me. My mom started to ask her questions and each time she had her head down not looking up at me and me "Astha" the name, her name that i repeated, I don't know how many times. I was just like a love struck puppy who wasn't taking his eyes of her but suddenly my dad asked me something. But I was so much engrossed at her innocent face that I hadn't heard him and answered what I felt. "I will marry Astha...I am ready to marry her." that was it she looked up, she saw me and I saw her, her beautiful eyes who were pure like a mirror and I could see the sparks in her eyes when she saw me and before I can do anything everyone in the room started to laugh loud. First I was confused why all were laughing but then I came to know that dad asked me if I want to know anything else. Today for the first time I knew that there is something else then just an arrogant high tempered person in me and this caring sweet and loving person in me is just For YOU, just for my Astha.

Flashback ends


I heard someone calling me, I turned around and found the jailer was standing there. A very strict middle aged man with but a kind heart, I know he was feeling sad for me but he can do anything, what should he do if I myself won't any help. To say the truth I am waiting for tomorrow, my last night on this world but I will wait for you, Astha.

End of POV

"Shlok it's dinner time and I would like it if u would have the last dinner with me." The jailer said with a very sad tone, but a very bright smile came on Shlok's face. "Sure sir...it would be my pleasure." "Shlok don't call me today Sir...just call me Kunal...but I still don't know why u are so happy knowing that u are going to die tomorrow." he walked out of the door of his cell and hugged Kunal for the last time "Kunal won't understand...u are not married." "So u are dieing because of your wife?" he nodded a no "No Kunal...I am not dieing because of her...I am leaving this world for her." They both walked to Kunal's room "U are right I won't understand but I know that u lover more than your life." Shlok didn't said anything and Kunal understood that he was missing his wife so after that he hadn't asked him anything.


Shimla, a big and old cottage


The weather was cold snow was falling down, all the trees were full with a white sheet. This was the most beautiful view but a girl who was just crying knowing that she will lose her life in some hours. Caressing her big baby belly whispering something to her unborn child and holding a picture of her husband. This girl was none other than Astha, Mrs. Astha Shlok Agnihotri, she was eight months pregnant but she was not happy, she was crying for her husband Shlok. Knowing that he was leaving her forever and she can't do anything, if it would be in her hands she would die with him but she promised him to live for him, for their unborn child, she will give the baby all the happiness that a father would give. Astha took Shlok's photo and placed a soft kiss "I love u Shlok...and I will live For YOU...for our child." She took her shawl and in her hand the picture of him, she walked out of her room to her ajju but before she can reach the living room a sudden pain came over her body and she held her belly tightly. Suddenly she felt something wet on her feet and she knew what was coming and then she screamed her lungs out.

~~~Bharti~~~


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Precap: Shlok dies😭 😭

Baby is born

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Edited by TheSexyDevil - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Bharti 😭 your stooory is sooo Beautiful yaaar
what a amazing writing yoou doo you took me in yooour stoory i was likee what happens now
it is soo sad but soo amazing yaaar
i felt sooo sooory for ashta and shlok what happend shlok wil be died tomoorow

and precaaaps 😭

Keeep it up yaaar Just amaaazing :)
Edited by .Siham. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omy godd ;-( ;-( very beautiful ss . M speechless reading dis! Y he s n jail ? Whats his fault . And cant wait to read d next part . Shlok dies ! ;-(;-(
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Bharti very lovely story what has happened that they are separted to never meet again..Its wonderfully written...U made me cry...
This time tragedy story okay but nxt time write happy walla story dear..
Thanks for sharing such a wonderful writeup and pls pm me..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Siham.




Bharti 😭 your stooory is sooo Beautiful yaaar
what a amazing writing yoou doo you took me in yooour stoory i was likee what happens now
it is soo sad but soo amazing yaaar
i felt sooo sooory for ashta and shlok what happend shlok wil be died tomoorow

and precaaaps 😭

Keeep it up yaaar Just amaaazing :)


Thank u soo much Siham🤗
I told ya it will be a sad one 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omggg wow bharti such a beautiful piece of work.
Very emotional.
Heart wrenching too.
The precap is really sad.
Can't wait for more.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asharkibiwi

Omy godd ;-( ;-( very beautiful ss . M speechless reading dis! Y he s n jail ? Whats his fault . And cant wait to read d next part . Shlok dies ! ;-(;-(

U have to read the next part 😆
But Thank u soo much😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Bharti
wow a lovely FF
it's written very beautifully
you are a great writer dear
The story is very interesting
so sad
Shlok dies 😭 my heart just broke
would love to see what happens
continue soon
Cheers>

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