Adni OS-PENITENCE - Page 5

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

hi Juhi.. this is one peek into Chandni's heart and mind.. you show the girl is minus militancy towards the dismissive,predominantly hurtful ASR.. inside. she is aware.. of something she may have said to contribute to his existing grief. Juhi.. you bring out brillantly, Chandni's confusion over how much she was involved in his past.. your title Penitence.. expands upon Chandni's need to know the complete truth,of her flippant statement .. you bring out the important issue that she is quite in the dark about the dire consequencs her words made for DEV..In the final part, you express beautifully the need of a loving wife to put right all the wrongs she may have brought about in her husband's life.Some fine adjectives you use,"chimerical paradise". The best bit the OS..ends on a positive note..Chandni, is not paralyzed by gulit! she is into looking out for postive resolves to this conflict between her and dev!.. it echoes back to their friendship.. in the show, friends fall out, but care for each other. brings about patching up! over all Juhi,many thanks for portraying a penisvely senistive Chandni.. prone to considering what holds Dev back from being her Dev...
Brillantly engaging piece of work.. pleasure to read your thoughts.. do write more OS, gives positive joy... much love hammie

Originally posted by: Arshi67

Juhi, I love the way you have written her introspection. It adds a layer of depth to her character that makes her someone worthy of being Advay's true friend. When you care for someone, it's natural to want to understand them. She has spent years yearning for him. Would she not wonder at his hatred? I like that you have chosen Mamaji to be the one she turns to.

Originally posted by: amortentia15

I will definitely try priya!😃

Originally posted by: 2filmy

Sure please write when you can

Originally posted by: 2filmy

Arrey kono bepar noy
Jokhon khushi uttor dao ami pore nebo
Parle eta lekhar cheshta koro

Originally posted by: ChitraGS

What do you think will happen if you use any word starting with a P or C or D around me 😆

but darling you too read DUCK as something else if may add so 😉

yeah i agree a tortured soul like him must find it difficult to sleep at night.

As far as SR is concerned i think he was beaten and bruised and badgered with tube lights and beer bottles so maybe Sleep just came naturally 😆, well thats my justification anyways,

AWWW i am so happy i can tickle u from hundreds of miles away, who says virtual life is fake

MUAAHHH MUAAHH TO u too meri choti si bunny

, Chitra

Originally posted by: amortentia15

ha nischoi tui bolechhish jokhn oboshyoi likhbo

antu ajker episode tar uopr o likhte boleche 2-3 baar aro dekhe tarpor likhbo😆

prothombaar barun ke dekhei katiye dyechi!! haha

Originally posted by: 2filmy

Ami khub khushi holum sune je tumi likhbe
jotobar chao dekho kono tara nei
amaro 1 bar dekhe aash mete ne
2 3 bar kore dekhte hoy 😆