Adni OS-PENITENCE - Page 3

Originally posted by: soumyamurali

Hi Juhi
Brilliant write up . Loved it. That's what I was commenting on chitra's thread yesterday. Instead of showing that silly dining table scene n that make up scene, if they had shown anything like this n later on continued with these games n all, then that's one hell of a story telling it'd been. But they spoiled her character further with all these silly things without any continuity.

I can imagine this scenario quite easily. I just hope they show something along these lines in future episodes. Ur sleeping pills thing is the most realistic thing. It is highly impossible for a person like him who is suffering with that kind of an emotional trauma to lead a normal life unless n until it is completely cured.

Originally posted by: amortentia15

antu...that is a satisfied zen mode wala smiley right😆

thanks!!

mone hochhilo ektu likhi normal situation e ki hoto!!

ja laal deklam goto 2din taate colour blind hoe jaowar kotha😆

thank you dear for such lovely words

muah

juhi

Originally posted by: Lost_Somewhere

Goto 2 diner age porjonto laal rang ta bhalo lagto..Eto overdose hoyeche apatoto 6 mash r laal rang er dike takabo na..😆

khub e bhalo laglo..tor lekha age kokhono porini.. this was first.. And it was a pleasant surprise..🤗

Originally posted by: soumyamurali

youre right soumya! she always had a depth of characer which in my opinion has gone for a toss

atleast in the last couple of episodes. its absolutely my opinion but yeh swag wala chandu given the gory backdrop is a little too much.

i know its trp pressure and that makes me grr😡

Originally posted by: amortentia15

coming to my nickuuu!!!muah

you got me rofling again 🤣!! really penitence se kidhar pohunch gayi

i wanted to write about the sleeping pills because aise tortured aadmi zindagi mein ghore bech ke nehi so sakta without medication

so suhaagraat wala sequence abhi bhi khatak raha tha

so ya

thank you again for bringing a smile more like a loud guffaw on my face which you never fail to do😆

muah

your amorwali juhi

Originally posted by: 2filmy

Anyway for your 1st work here is is marvelous
5 star writing