||FF: Written in stars|| Last part Pg 77 - Page 27

Created

Last reply

Replies

475

Views

65.4k

Users

27

Likes

1.5k

Frequent Posters

misfit007 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
Personally I want to see Advay realising the true extent to which Chandini's been mentally damaged and Veer too. His behaviour honestly pissed me off the most. I hate when people pick a side without hearing what the other side has to say.
Anyone in Chandini's place would lose all trust and belief in relations, especially of a brother, if something like that happened to her.

I like how you've kept it realistic. I hope you don't make the journey of her recovery too easy. I'd actually like to see her go through a bit of depression and this time for the family to actually witness it because so far only Arnav has seen her in that state.

Edit.
And not to forget the diary! I really hope Advay finds out how Chandini's loved him and really loved him, and how she stepped back when he was going to marry Sasha.
I don't want an easy forgiveness for him. The feeling of hatred and love aren't easy to handle when directed towards the same person.

Good luck with the rest of the story. Can't wait for what you have in store for us. You are doing a fantastic job. I mean I barely ever comment for anyone, mostly just like the story but you forced me to comment. So Kudos
Edited by can_pak - 7 years ago
Ravisadha thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
You write extremely well! I have been thinking about this story all day. And your story forced me to comment. Excellent writing skill 👏 congrats!!!
Pixiepixel11 thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
Eagerly waiting for the next update.
2filmy thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail Commentator Level 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: hailly


Umm when did pratham write a love letter to Chandni and when was aditi punished? did I miss something here.


Yes u missed some update I think
Pratham wrote a love letter to her and sent it to her in a notebook that had important notes for her
The person who took the notebook to Advay house gave it to his house keeper who gave it to Advay
He saw it and was angry
Aditi was punished as she had done a similar thing with some one else and was caught
Advay had heard it Chandni does not know it
2filmy thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail Commentator Level 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
Eagerly waiting for the next update
hailly thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: 2filmy


Yes u missed some update I think
Pratham wrote a love letter to her and sent it to her in a notebook that had important notes for her
The person who took the notebook to Advay house gave it to his house keeper who gave it to Advay
He saw it and was angry
Aditi was punished as she had done a similar thing with some one else and was caught
Advay had heard it Chandni does not know it


Thanks caught up with the updates I have missed just now.
Ravisadha thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: 2filmy


Yes u missed some update I think
Pratham wrote a love letter to her and sent it to her in a notebook that had important notes for her
The person who took the notebook to Advay house gave it to his house keeper who gave it to Advay
He saw it and was angry
Aditi was punished as she had done a similar thing with some one else and was caught
Advay had heard it Chandni does not know it

is possible can you please specify the update number/date? Or any before or after hint please?
wupa thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
Hi dear!
This is one of the best and gripping FFs I have read in a long time. Thank you for sharing!
Your story telling skills are just mind blowing!
Hoping to read more.
Take care!
2filmy thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail Commentator Level 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
Sorry ravisadha
I dont remember the update number at all
.Ashleydevlin. thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 7 years ago
its on pg 44. I will update the index. I will be updating the story tonight. I haven't got the chance yet to pen anything down because of routine work but will try to do it as soon as I get free.

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".