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[INDEX]

Prologue
Pg 1
Chapter 1
Pg 1
Chapter 2
Pg 1
Chapter 3
Pg 1
Chapter 4
Pg 2
Chapter 5
Pg 3
Chapter 6
Pg 3
Chapter 7
Pg 3
Chapter 8
Pg 4
Chapter 9
Pg 4
Chapter 10
Pg 4
Chapter 11
Pg 5
Chapter 12
Pg 6
chapter 13
Pg 7
Chapter 14
Pg 7
Chapter 15
Pg 8
Chapter 16
Pg 9
Chapter 17
Pg 9
Chapter 18
Pg 10
Chapter 19
Pg 10
Chapter 20
Pg 11
Chapter 21
Pg 12
Chapter 22
Pg 12
Chapter 23
Pg 14
Chapter 24
Pg 14
Chapter 25
Pg 15
Chapter 26
Pg 16
Chapter 27
Pg 18
Chapter 28
Pg 18
Chapter 29
Pg 21
Chapter 30
Pg 21
Chapter 31
Pg 21
Chapter 32
Pg 22
Chapter 33
Pg 22
Chapter 34
Pg 23
Chapter 35
Pg 26
Chapter 36
Pg 26
Chapter 37
Pg 29
Chapter 38
Pg 29
Chapter 39
Pg 29
Chapter 40
Pg 29
Chapter 41
Pg 29
Chapter 42
Pg 30
Chapter 43
Pg 30
Chapter 44
Pg 30
Chapter 45
Pg 33
Chapter 46
Pg 33
Chapter 47
Pg 35
Chapter 48
Pg 35
Chapter 49
Pg 36
Chapter 50
Pg 36
Chapter 51
Pg 36
Chapter 52
Pg 37
Chapter 53
Pg 40
Chapter 54
Pg 40
Chapter 55
Pg 40
Chapter 56
Pg 41
Chapter 57
Pg 44
Chapter 58
Pg 44
Chapter 59
Pg 44
Chapter 60
Pg 45
Chapter 61
Pg 45
Chapter 62
Pg 45
Chapter 63
Pg 45
Chapter 64
Pg 45
Chapter 65
Pg 46
Chapter 66
Pg 46
Chapter 67
Pg 46
Chapter 68
Pg 46
Chapter 69
Pg 50
Chapter 70
Pg 51
Chapter 71
Pg 51
Chapter 72
Pg 52
Chapter 73
Pg 59
Chapter 74
Pg 60
Chapter 75
Pg 60
Chapter 76
Pg 60
Chapter 77
Pg 60
Chapter 78
Pg 62
Chapter 79
Pg
Chapter 80
Pg 69
Chapter 81
Pg 71
Chapter 82
Pg 73
Chapter 83
Pg 74
Chapter 84
Pg 75
Chapter 85
Pg 75
Chapter 86
Pg 77



Edited by .Ashleydevlin. - 7 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Whoah... What a gripping story.
I read all the 3 chapters at one shot.
Advay tied the Mangalsutra without realising his actions. Chandni is too young to realise the meaning behind it. There was no one else around to witness this. God knows how Arnav and Khushi wiill react to this - since they treat Chandni like their own daughter... Can't wait to read further story...

Just a small doubt - what is the age difference between Advay and Chandni in this story ? Also, I see Astha's name somewhere. Who is Astha in the story ?

One small observation for better readability - Font size could be a little bigger - like Chapter 2.
Edited by rajatshweta - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Read all the updates at once
This will be a gripping story
Loved them all
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Advay calls her tiny😛
So adorable
Chandni is so cute
Just love Advay and Chandnis bond
Reaad all three at once
Please continue
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajatshweta


Whoah... What a gripping story.
I read all the 3 chapters at one shot.
Advay tied the Mangalsutra without realising his actions. Chandni is too young to realise the meaning behind it. There was no one else around to witness this. God knows how Arnav and Khushi wiill react to this - since they treat Chandni like their own daughter... Can't wait to read further story...

Just a small doubt - what is the age difference between Advay and Chandni in this story ? Also, I see Astha's name somewhere. Who is Astha in the story ?

One small observation for better readability - Font size could be a little bigger - like Chapter 2.


Thank you. I wrote this story for another couple and the girl name was aastha. So astha name was there in error. They have huge age gap around 16 years I guess. When I initially wrote this story I remembered the exact age bit now I am not sure.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ASRkiMoonlight

Advay calls her tiny😛

So adorable
Chandni is so cute
Just love Advay and Chandnis bond
Reaad all three at once
Please continue


Thanks. Since I have already written this story, so you won't have to wait for long 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey update soon please 😊
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Excellent update
I loved how she explained the meaning of mangalsutra
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved the update
continue soon

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