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.Ashleydevlin.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#251

Originally posted by: Dinali
Very emotional...
Read in one go...eagerly waiting for the next update..

It was very emotional. I will update tomorrow

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.Ashleydevlin.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#252

Originally posted by: mahin123
very emotional. I am feeling sad for both of them. plz give them some happiness. they truly deserve some. once again thank you so much for the beautiful story

Happy days are here again. Things will get positive from now on wards and thank you😳. I am sorry if it was bit too depressing.

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#253

So now he is jealous of Pratham
Did he really write her that love letter ?
But she felt it was a joke ?
Or she acted that it was a joke in front of him ?
He forbids her from working there again
She is so silent now and does as he pleases
She even changed herself a lot by this time
Advay is having a change of heart and accepted her
He wants to surprise her for the anniversary
I am happy Aditi is punished
But Advay still cannot forget that incident fully

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#254

Advay gave her a lovely anniversary surprise
A long drive with that romantic perfect song
And the fire works wow
And then 1 week in Budapest
Every one expecting good news now
Oh poor girl now Khushi is also upset
But she understood later
But Adbay is upset and wants her to manage this on her own
He does not want to accept her request to help her in this matter

Edited by 2filmy - 7 years ago

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Frey

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Posted: 7 years ago

#255

I've been thinking about this story all day today. You write extremely well! So much so that I've been imagining a lot of scenarios in my head LOL. If you dont mind, can we have a proper redemption track for Advay and I want Chandini to ask this one question from Advay (when he starts regretting his actions) that 'What would have happened if I hadnt gottne sick? Would you still have come back to me?' Like I want her to convey to Advay that if she had died or something in all this ordeal then what would have happened?

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#256

So she both loves and hates Advay now
and hearing Gauti she feels what she misses in her marriage
Finally she announced openly about having a kid
As usual every one is shocked
Ataya is rude to her and Advay defended her in front of Veer
May be as this all happened as she was not ready for the baby
So that made him defend her ?
Advay accused her she made him so cruel
Poor Khushi is worried and Arnav asking her to give more time

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#257

The wedding made her feel bad as there was not love yet
They got lost in each other suddenly
Both got late but Advay did not drop her
Gosh Advay did not notice her state ?
Romila told her and Chandni told her all
Their full conversation was meaningful
Love and respect cannot be forced
OMG now she has severe depression
Thankfully Arnav came back to her

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#258

Finally Advay decides to accept her fully
He comes back and Chandni is angry
She kept him out of the room he too did the same
Ataya fuelled Khushi's anger more
Now Khushi had to make they stay in the same room
Chandni took a wrong decision here
That is harming the reputation of the company
Ok now she has to be taken to the hospital
Her condition is bad and Khushi talked to Advay

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#259

OK this was a seriously painful emotional and sad update
They both deserve happiness as they both are good at heart
But they never even communicate properly
They really need to understand each other better
I hope Chandni too matures a bit and Advay is more sympathetic
Ataya needs to go away from the house

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hailly

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Posted: 7 years ago

#260

Originally posted by: 2filmy
So now he is jealous of Pratham
Did he really write her that love letter ?
But she felt it was a joke ?
Or she acted that it was a joke in front of him ?
He forbids her from working there again
She is so silent now and does as he pleases
She even changed herself a lot by this time
Advay is having a change of heart and accepted her
He wants to surprise her for the anniversary
I am happy Aditi is punished
But Advay still cannot forget that incident fully

Umm when did pratham write a love letter to Chandni and when was aditi punished? did I miss something here.