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.Ashleydevlin.

@.Ashleydevlin.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#241

Originally posted by: -Chipper-Treat-
Amazing loved it so much.
Continue soon.

Thank you. I just updated😛

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

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Posted: 7 years ago

#242

Such an emotional roller coaster ride.
Chandni needs to get away from Advay.
Both need space.
She needs to get physically and mentally stable.
Their relationship is getting suffocated.
They need breathing space.
Continue soon.

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Lubana

@ASRkiMoonlight

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Posted: 7 years ago

#243

This was so messed up

I hate Advay for what he did to her

these two doesnt even communicate properly

both need serious help..

Finally Advay realized how badly he treated her

He made her suffer just because of her one mistake..so bitter

deprived her of many necessities..so cruel

I dont know what to think of this update.

Felt so many emotions while reading it

pity, anger, helplessness, sympathy, sorry, heartsick...

She deserve so much better..she suffered a lot

Please make these two resolve these issues cause non of them are bad at heart

Feel so helpless for them

Please update soon

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hailly

@hailly

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#244

Amazing update.
Poor Chandni really felt bad for her.
Continue soon please.

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Dinali

@Dinali

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Posted: 7 years ago

#245

Very emotional...

Read in one go...eagerly waiting for the next update..

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mahin

@mahin123

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Posted: 7 years ago

#246

very emotional. I am feeling sad for both of them. plz give them some happiness. they truly deserve some. once again thank you so much for the beautiful story

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.Ashleydevlin.

@.Ashleydevlin.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: -Chipper-Treat-
Such an emotional roller coaster ride.
Chandni needs to get away from Advay.
Both need space.
She needs to get physically and mentally stable.
Their relationship is getting suffocated.
They need breathing space.
Continue soon.

These chapters were very emotional and depressing, when I first wrote them I was surprised that why I am writing something so sad. But it will get better from now. I will rewrite the ending and it will get much happier from here onwards but it will take me sometime. Even though most of these chapters were already written and I didn't change much n but even reading them I was transported back into time when I first wrote them. It is emotionally draining. I will take a break from writing and won't post anything tonight. I need to charge up again

I don't do sad endings but when I wrote these chapters i thought that may be chandhini should die because it was too much but I continued and last night again, I thought to kill her off but she is alive and breathing and things will get better. I have already thought of really nice scenes

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.Ashleydevlin.

@.Ashleydevlin.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: ASRkiMoonlight
This was so messed up
I hate Advay for what he did to her
these two doesnt even communicate properly
both need serious help..
Finally Advay realized how badly he treated her
He made her suffer just because of her one mistake..so bitter
deprived her of many necessities..so cruel
I dont know what to think of this update.
Felt so many emotions while reading it
pity, anger, helplessness, sympathy, sorry, heartsick...
She deserve so much better..she suffered a lot
Please make these two resolve these issues cause non of them are bad at heart
Feel so helpless for them
Please update soon

I hated Advay a little too. Its inevitable but he loves her. This time I wrote from male pov too,so I can see you lot are not that angry while in original it was mostly chandhini's diary. So, it was more hard for everyone. she definitely deserve better. The issues are going to resolve now, this time Advay messed up big time and even though he didn't want to things did happen.

It will get much positive from here. I promise. it will be happy and non-depressing. I will try to update but I need a tiny break of one day because I feel emotionally depressed. I couldn't sleep last night. I need to get over this couple.