OS - The Truth shall break you Part I - Page 2

Originally posted by: hailly

Awesome update, loved it.
Continue soon please.

Thanks for encouraging me by commenting & liking my stories 😳

Beautiful waiting for the sequel

Originally posted by: Angels11

Glad u liked it. I always wanted Chandni to find the answer within her heart. I dint want her to simply stumble upon Dev's photo or Advay to blurt out the truth in anger. I wanted her to listen to her heart. I wanted her to feel that pull towards Advay & try to find the reason behind it. Why he was strangely familiar to her. Of course I was saving this big scene & OS for my ADni Hate marriage series. But since u wanted me to write an OS on this decided to write early & not as part of the Marriage series 😊

I loved it ❤️
This is better where she finds it out herself
She had all the clues she just had to put them together
Oh sorry did your FF get spoiled for this ?
You can give a slight different version in the FF too
I love your series too ❤️

Originally posted by: 2filmy

I loved it ❤️
This is better where she finds it out herself
She had all the clues she just had to put them together
Oh sorry did your FF get spoiled for this ?
You can give a slight different version in the FF too
I love your series too ❤️

Actually I was planning 2 leave clues & hints for Chandni in my series & gradually she puts together all the clues. This was supp 2 b the big revelation in my Marriage series 😆

But no issues I will think up of something else & change it now in that series 😉

Originally posted by: Joyness

Beautiful waiting for the sequel

Thanks 😊

Wow this was splendid. Hope it plays out like this in the show as well...

wow... it is so beautiful... 👏

Wow..brilliant OS

Originally posted by: Angels11

Actually I was planning 2 leave clues & hints for Chandni in my series & gradually she puts together all the clues. This was supp 2 b the big revelation in my Marriage series 😆

But no issues I will think up of something else & change it now in that series 😉

I am so so sorry
I had no idea
But I know you will come up with something equally brilliant
You are much better than our CVs ❤️

As this is my lucky day and you are being so kind
Can I please get a 3 shot where Advay is seriously injured
And Chandni is taking care of him ?
And he is doing nakhra to take medicines