T & T Tales! (Shivika) The Love That Stayed-Completed - Page 5

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Posted: 7 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: tanisha997

Interesting concept👏

Thanks for pm..


Thank you so much for commenting ,Tanisha.😛😛
I am glad that you found the concept interesting. 😳😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Khidki

This is amazing!

Those words in italics were like the cherry on top.

The build up is so well!
Love this Anika totally.

Already feeling for this Shivaay!

Writer two has some amazing stuff to do here!

Kudos to You Poorvi!! Its very well narrated. :)


First of all, I want to thank you for organising this activity, Annikaa. This is real fun.⭐️⭐️

Now, thanks for liking my narration and feeling that the build-up was good. 😳😳
I was quite anxious about it ( though most of the times, I remain the same).😊😊
Thank God, people did not hate Annika for being negative. 😃😃
Shivaay has been always your favourite ( Mine too😉) so feeling for him makes sense.😆😆
Anya has updated her story and I loved her part. 😛😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: itzMYattitude

oh my two most fav writers have written a story i dont know about

glad i got a chance to read it =)

Rainzz do i have to tell u again how brilliant u r and this part was no exception
a beautifully started story taken forward by another amazing part


noone and i repeat noone can write hurt shivaay better than u
shivika ff of urs featuring sameer was one of the finest
lovely piece of writing guys
u guys made my day thank u so much...



Haha! I'm glad that you enjoyed reading this story and that we both were a part of this story as you said we are your fav writers :) Well to be true I was too overjoyed to continue poorvika story because I really wanted to do a collaborate work with her but it seems god heard my wish before I could mutter them in real ❤️
Yes you said right, The way she wrote the story had made me think a lot of stuffs, that's the reason her writing is so poignant and perfect ❤️

And thanks a ton for the compliment, I feel overwhelmed to know that you still love my MPBTC series, and Sameer is still staying at some corner of your heart 😳
I too miss that story even I have a half written epilogue of it but never had the guts to post it because it's been too late and I think it will be of no use so I let it be the way I have ended it ;)

Much Love.
-Anya.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: --Risha--

This was a great way to take the story forward! I must say you've tied it up very nicely with the first part. Great explanation for why Shivaay did what he did. The third writer has their task cut out for them, especially given the cliffhanger conclusion you've given. Nicely done, Anya. The scene where OmRu come to see Annika is done well. The ever-curious brothers just NEED to see the girl their brother fell for 😆 Loved reading this!



Hey Risha 🤗
Thank you so much Man! I'm glad that i didn't disappointed you because I thought most of the readers will be mad at me for doing this to shivaay, One reason for it was that Poorvika had written the first part in such a manner that I was left with a lot of options to continue maybe some college stuffs or prank or some challenge mainly dares but I came up with this, because I'm a big sadist 😆
Haha! You are right Omru, are too curious to see how annika look alike and more then Om it is Rudra who is excited, and I really loved writing that scene ❤️

Much Love.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Rainy-Season

<font size="2" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000ff">Anya, Yehh kya kiya hai meri story ke saath??😭😭

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Trust me, whatever you have done to the story is just beyond amazing. It is so damn beautiful. ❤️❤️



I had never thought that you would take this way for moving forward the story.⭐️⭐️



Truly, you nailed it in my point of view. And, I am definitely not saying this because it is my story. I genuinely love emotional stories. I have told you my love for the MPBTC series, didn't I ??😳😳



So,Thank you ... thank you.. Thank you a ton for writing my favourite genre. 🤗🤗



Believe me, the story gave me goose-bumps in between. 😛😛



Plus, I will give you a Chameli if you thought anything close to that you destroyed my story. First of all, my story was not at all beautiful. Secondly, it could never get better continuation this awesome piece of writing.



Love you to the power infinity, Anya.❤️❤️



P.S.: I still have to Unres on your work. Sorry.</font>



Poorvika ❤️
Well I didn't believed that first line trust me, I was freaking but later as I scrolled I saw what you wrote and my heartbeats went to normal rate *sighing*
I was just too nervous because I have taken an all together different and tragic turn which was not much required here because the way you wrote this story, it was very much easy to give some other reason mainly they were in college and he did this due to some dare, prank, or have been jeaulous and out of it said all those stuffs but I took this patha Nd now I'm glad that you liked this genre.
Yeah i know how much you loved my series and I'm overwhelmed to see that :)
And you don't need to thank me over and over again :) Beside I swear I will not think that I have done injustice to your story because I'm scared of Chameli but if again you are going to utter that you wrote the story very bad and it was not good, I will give you two pair of Chameli *flying Chameli recieved*

I love you too tilt he power of Infinity ❤️
Love,
-Anya.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Superb update
Shivay knew that Anika is here to destroy him
But he loves her too much to let her go because he has heart cancer
Update soon



Thank you so much dear ❤️
Well whatever you said it can go that way too but I have written this way that he thought that whatever he did with her 2 years ago, maybe not stopping her in destroying him will be his redemption directly or indirectly :) it doesn't concern him anymore that he had heart cancer or not.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac

Partner 🤗


You gave it a beautiful touch. This justified Shivaay's actions very well.

OmRu's interaction with Anika was great 😆 And of course, Shivaay's condition and Anika facing the truth was amazing. I am so excited for what we can have next :D

P.S. Cheers to the fact that Shivaay knew Anika is here to destroy him and yet he let it be. Because he feels it's all his faults😭



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Thank you so much dear, I'm extremely glad that you were able to understand the motive why shivaay did that to annika and found it beautiful :-)
Well Seeing Annika and passing her were their birth right beside they were just too curious to know on whom their brother had lost his heart altogether 😆
I really loved writing this scene, it was fun!

Haha! I'm just too curious to know what the next writer will do to this and I hope against hope it didn't turn out to be the way i thought it would be :( I hope you understand what I'm trying to say ;)
Well I always think that Shivaay's character is like this only, he never says what he wanted or what he did his actions are enough to make the other person realise what he is doing and what he wanted. He knew he did bad with annika and so to get punished he didn't stopped annika for doing whatever she wanted.

Anyways I think I said a lot 😆

Love,
-Anya.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

OMG...This is how a twist and turn tales should be...

The way you taken the story from the first part to now... its superb yar...I just loved this... your emotional updates are my one of the favorites anya... Feeling sad for shivika...I really hope they survives it... sab next writer ki haath mein hai... bas ek hi dua hai...let him write a happy ending...



Well you are right Aparna, this is how a twist and turn tales are to be true I thought to give some college background to the past but then dropped the idea maybe it was just too common :P and decided to take this decision.

Aww! Thank you so much Aparna I'm glad that my over excessively emotional freak shots are loved by you 😆 but believe me I always fear that maybe you all would not like the shot which I wrote before updating it as it will Spoil you all reader's mood because of it being emotional :P but I always get surprised to see you all loving them :)

Yeah I too hope that the next writer doesn't write the way I thought it would turn out, I hope you understand what I wanna say ;) because whatever I was thinking while writing this it will be always bad :/

Much Love,
-Anya.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: Khidki

Omg! Such a sad twist😭

The entire scene was so heartfelt. With OmRu in picture now.
This is so heartbreaking, the scene of him unconscious in her lap stole it away for me.
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Loved how you continued and gave a still deeper menaingbto his eyes never lied. That stood out for me. "Dil pe thaa kar ke laga!"

Let's see how writer three concludes this.😭



Haha! Well that line had already touched my heart from the starting that When I started writing this part, I was thinking to reverse those lines and make both of them realise that whatever they were thinking was wrong, his eyes never lied while her's lied. 😆
But I was able to showcase Shivaay's part only in this sort and gave a little bit of hint to annika's part ;)
Let's see what will happen in the conclusion I hope it doesn't turn out the way this story usually has too but I can't help it if the next writer is a sadist ;)
And Omru need to be here, they need to see who was the girl their brother lost his heart too beside they are the only one who will disclose this secret to annika because Shivaay will never do this, he will never let her get even a hint of it. This is how shivaay is. He is just too caring ❤️

I know I'm a moron, i always praise him but at the same time I'm the only one who gives him pain 😆
But I can't help it ;)

Anyways thanks a ton for this!

Much Love,
-Anya.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: farinaks

It was amazing beautiful emotional and bliss to read

Nd u did justification Wythenshawe Poorvika's story



Thank you so much Fari ❤️
I'm glad that you found t to be justifying Poorvika's story ;)

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