T & T Tales! (Shivika) The Love That Stayed-Completed - Page 6

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Posted: 7 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Rachna.KG

I am loving these twist and turn tales. This is amazing and we get best of al the worlds.

This story is amazing with a totally different angle. Very emotional but loved it.



Hey Rachna (I hope I'm calling you right)
Well you need to say the above two lines to Annika because she was the one who had introduced this twist and turn tale ;) I'm too loving to be a part of this collaboration ❤️

And thank you so much dear, I'm glad that you were able to take this storyline different from the other even if it is emotional and tragic but this was only possible with Poorvika being in the he starting ❤️ she was the only one who started this story and made me inspire to write more!

Much Love,
-Anya.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: ithihaas

Anya,

The second part of the story is beautifully written... I have never imagined that you would take this route to the happenings with Shivika though it does completely justify what you have written about what happened years back with them as written by Poorvika...

But, why was he searching for her from 2 yrs ? Whatever happened was way back during their school/college...is it bcoz he needed her for his company to be saved ?
And in the first part too its said that she has been trying to get some way to destroy his already crumbling empire...

but what you have written is so emotional and heart breaking...very well written and I am eagerly waiting for the final update..

-Rohini



Hey Rohini, i'm Glad that you found this part to be justification for Shivaay's wrong doing with Annika :) I would have taken some other route basically a college scene but thought against it because I really wanted to show something twisty and heartbreaking so this was the best option.

Coming to your queries, why he searched for her from 2 years then it's like maybe Whatever happened was two years ago because in the second line of the first para only Poorvika wrote that She had been liking for a reason to destroy the Oberoi empire and this will only happen after shivaay did that to her, beside int he other hand Poorvika also wrote that Annik had vanished after that incident and he had been searching for her from then on.
I give a more elaborate reason why he was searching for her is because he wanted to know that she was fine and save and maybe he can redeem himself for doing that with her. Him having a problem in the company while she joining was just a coincidence and nothing much. He wasn't searching for her so that he could take her help as who know taht the head of his finance department will die.
I hope I was able to solve your queries and even now you are getting confused then let me know about it :)

Well I'm Too excited to know what the future hold for them and it is completely in the hands of the next writer hoping against hope that it will be satisfying :)

Much Love,
-Anya.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: bworm

Superb.

Very interesting.
Waiting eagerly what happens next.


Thank you so much for liking this,bworm.😃😃
I am happy to know that you found it interesting. 😛😛
The next part has been updated. I hope you read it soon.😳😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#54
For once i loved the twist more than the start of the story ❤️ I thought Shivaay was a spoilt brat who doesn't value love in front of money and status but it turned out to be untrue oh how relived i was to find that Shivaay also loved anika and did everything just to protect her ❤️ . Brilliant twist now i'm looking forward for the end
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Posted: 7 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac

It is too good Poorvi 🤗

You added an unexpected twist to the tale ;)
The whole backstory made it so much more interesting.

And the lines about his eyes always lying and hers never was beautiful ❤️

I wonder what'll happen next.


Thank you so much for finding this nice, Krishi.🤗🤗
Backstory ... Unexpected twist... Hehehe... If I tell you the secret , I had nothing that I could offer the next writer in concrete. So, I just wrote the story loose-endedly. 😆😆
It feels great to know that people are liking those lines. They are my favourite too.😉😉
As, I am late in replying back, now you already know what has happened in the story. And, I am glad you loved that too because I loved it too.😳😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: itzMYattitude

oh my two most fav writers have written a story i dont know about

glad i got a chance to read it =)

Rainzz do i have to tell u again how brilliant u r and this part was no exception
a beautifully started story taken forward by another amazing part


noone and i repeat noone can write hurt shivaay better than u
shivika ff of urs featuring sameer was one of the finest
lovely piece of writing guys
u guys made my day thank u so much...


Aww... Thank you for saying that we both are your favourite. It means a lot. 😛😛
And yes, we are equally glad that you got a chance to read it.It is a pleasure to find you on our threads.😳😳
Thank you so much for you kind words about this story , dear.😃😃
I am glad that you found it beautiful. 😊😊
@blue: Same to same. I loved that fiction. 😳😳
@purple:Thank you for saying this. And, I am having a similar feeling after reading the comment . 🤗🤗

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Posted: 7 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: ManaliKSGIAN

For once i loved the twist more than the start of the story❤️I thought Shivaay was a spoilt brat who doesn't value love in front of money and status but it turned out to be untrue oh how relived i was to find that Shivaay also loved anika and did everything just to protect her❤️. Brilliant twist now i'm looking forward for the end



Hello there, well I'm glad that you loved the twist in the tale but believe me it can never have happened if Poorvika wasn't there because the way she beautifully put down the whole plot had me come up with so many ideas that I've been in trauma for what to take. To make this story more heartfelt I took the most cruel decision that's i never wanted to and I'm more than happy that people are liking it.
Well to be true I never got the idea of Shivaay being a spoiled brat because I was getting the vibe from this story that he can never be so cruel to annika that he will insult her in front of all the people :P
I'm too looking Forward for how this story will end. Hoping for the best.

Much Love.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: ithihaas

Poorvika

This is so different story that you have started for Shivika and very intriguing 😉

Not sure if that was prank or some mis-understanding that went wrong with Shivika during college but then things changed for both of them.. while the man regretted the lady is waiting to get back...

Shivaay facing issues with his company is not something I have ever envisioned bcoz he is always the best and he knows how to get back to the top...

He knew that she is here to destroy him and yet he hired her ! She saw the love but misunderstood it to be a facade.. interesting dynamics between them..

cannot wait for another writer's take on the concept that you have penned down...



Thank You so much for dropping by here, Rohini.😛😛
It is a pleasure to see you on this thread.😳😳
I am glad you found this story intriguing. 😊😊
Anya took a different way to justify his actions in the past. A more emotional path in my favourite genre. I am happy that you liked that too. 😳😳
@bold: Hahaha... I can envision that or to be exact I found that more relevant to justify the urgent need of having Head of Finance. 😆😆
I am really elated to know that you liked the dynamics of the story.😊😊
I am late in responding back. Next part is up. It is time for next to next i.e. Concluding part.😃😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: elysianights

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Poorvika ❤️
Well I didn't believed that first line trust me, I was freaking but later as I scrolled I saw what you wrote and my heartbeats went to normal rate *sighing*
I was just too nervous because I have taken an all together different and tragic turn which was not much required here because the way you wrote this story, it was very much easy to give some other reason mainly they were in college and he did this due to some dare, prank, or have been jeaulous and out of it said all those stuffs but I took this patha Nd now I'm glad that you liked this genre.
Yeah i know how much you loved my series and I'm overwhelmed to see that :)
And you don't need to thank me over and over again :) Beside I swear I will not think that I have done injustice to your story because I'm scared of Chameli but if again you are going to utter that you wrote the story very bad and it was not good, I will give you two pair of Chameli *flying Chameli recieved*

I love you too tilt he power of Infinity ❤️
Love,
-Anya.


Hehehe...Chhota sa prank tha.😉😉
There was no need to freak out, you should know I always like your write-ups.😳😳
As I told you, I am too much happy that you took that path. And honestly, I was pleasantly surprised after reading the part-2, after all it was emotional in taste. My favourite.⭐️⭐️
Okay, I won't say anything regarding the stories, don't throw your Chamelies at me.😳😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Not going to say much otherwise I will reveal.

Happy Reading!😳

Part 3 -The Conclusion

- Love Finds It's Way -


"Do you still think she doesn't love you, Shivaay? Om asked his brother.

"I can't believe what the three of you did! Shivaay said disappointed.

"This is it Bhaiya! You don't understand, just like your happiness is with her, hers is with you. Rudra spoke, "You only say right, mistakes happen, everyone commits mistakes. But one shouldn't run away from them. One should make things right. Then why are you running away?

"Rudra! scolded Shivaay's voice.

"He is right. Omkara said in seriousness. "We can't see you like...like this. Stop drowning in guilt. Stop. What you did was wrong! You accept it. Then why not go ahead and correct it.

"After the stunt you guys have pulled, she will only hate me more! said Shivaay.

"She doesn't hate you, Shivaay! She doesn't. " rang Om's voice.

"How could you Om? Shivaay asked in a small voice. "You never lied.

"I did, I agree my way was wrong but motive isn't. You both are mad. She loves you. You love her. After years, still, the love is there. I had to, I can't let you both be stupid. Can't let you be idiots and destroy not just yours but each other's lives. You know how it is to live with deep regret? I do. Even today, I feel the pain, if only if only I had told Gauri once, that I loved her, she would be alive, she wouldn't have left that day. " Omkara's eyes turned moist.

Shivaay-"Om...Om... he held his brother's hand. "I ...I know how it feels. I wish I was not so foolish that day, I had little amount of brain. I still can't get myself one with the fact that I ...I insulted her in front of everyone...I said those words to her...I ...I...rejected her love...I broke her heart...I am very bad, Om, very bad, I don't deserve her. And on what basis? Just because I ...I though she din't match my standards? Shivaay cried. "I don't match her. I don't deserve her...I don't deserve to be loved! He broke into sobs.

"Shut up Shivaay! Om spoke crying. "You might be punishing yourself by doing this. But what you don't realise is, you are punishing her. She still loves you. She was devastated when she thought it was you there lying lifeless.

"No. Om. No.This is not right! You guys shouldn't have done this. You shouldn't have. " Shivaay spoke annoyed. "Haven't I given her enough pain, that you all...

"Bhai, Omkara and Rudra are not wrong. " spoke Mahi, his twin brother. "We did that so that we could make the two of you realise that...that...time is kind to none. But you are lucky, time has brought you both together again, not everyone gets second chances, you both have, don't let it go, don't let her go!

"Mahi, how could you? " Shivaay said losing it.

He was disappointed at his three brothers, for the stunt that they pulled in front of Anika, had left him in pain and disappointment.

"How could you three! Usse kuch ho jata toh! he cried his heart's fear out.

"hua toh nahi naa! came a woman's voice. The four of them turned to find Anika standing outside the room's door where she was sleeping, after the doctor had left. She had fainted due to shock. The doctor had given medicines due to which she was sleeping. The four men hadn't realised that Anika had been standing there for a while listening to them.

"Anika! he whispered. His eyes reflecting pain, regret, sorrow, concern and love.

She looked at those blue sapphires. His eyes never lied!

"Enough she said, before any of his brothers could speak, raising her palm. Her eyes din't move from him.

"Anika, I m...Im sorry. They shouldn't have...

A slap landed on his cheek. The sound resounded in his ears. His eyes were moist. The trio looked at each other and slipped out. The two needed to talk!

"How could you Shivaay? she spat tears rolling down her cheeks.

"I ...I din't know really, I wouldn't have let them if I... he explained. His heart burning.

She pulled his collar, What's you problem Shivaay? She looked at him with pleading eyes.

"Why ? Why? she screamed resting her forehead on his chest.

He closed his eyes, she was hurt but he felt the pain.

"Am I so undeserving Shivaay? she asked in a small voice looking up at him. "I don't deserve your love? her eyes were screaming of her longing to be loved by him.

He cupped her face, his thumb wiping her tears, "I am the undeserving one Anika! I don't deserve you! He cried holding her palms.

"Shivaay... she said sniffing.

"I have hated myself every day, every damn day. For saying those words to you. I rejected you but I had strangled my heart to listen to my ego, to my pride...and I have died every minute after that. I had ruthlessly killed something that was so tender so..delicate...so beautiful! He grief reflected in her eyes.

He wished her eyes lied, but they din't!

"I m sorry Anika. I m sorry... he held her close and cried. The pain, regret, grief he had bottled up in his heart for ears, was overflowing today.

"I hate you! she said wiping her tears. "I hate you very much!

He looked down, not meeting her eyes. "I deserve every bit of it.

"No . You Don't " she said in a crisp voice.

"I hate you, because no matter how much and how long I have tried I can't get myself to hate you!

"Tum bahut acchi ho Anika!

"Aap bahut bure hain SHivaay! She smiled making a grumpy face.

"Rona band karo! he said wiping her tears. Those tears that seemed to be flowing since evr.

"Kaise karoon? She asked honestly. " I thought everything was over!

"I apologise for what my brothers...

"Don't! she said. "They opened my eyes. They are not idiots like you. She giggled in her cries.

"I am...I am...an idiot. He smiled amidst tears.

"A big one! she added. He nodded in agreement.

"And I am still in love with this idiot.

He smiled wider than ever now.

"This idiot has loved you since ever!

"I know! she whispered.

They stared at each other, tears streaming down their cheeks. He pulled her closer and she hugged him. The pain she had felt hours back was unbeatable. She might have pretended to herself that she was that woman who would avenge herself, break him. But, the truth couldn't be twisted. She loved him! She loved him back then, she loved him all these years, and she would always love him. No matter how big an ego head he had been in the past or how big an idiot he was now, to push her away from him.

A knock made them break apart.

Om, Rudra and Mahi entered with serious faces. "We are sorry! Mahi spoke for the three of them.

"Don't be ! Anika said smiling.

"You guys made me realise who I am, who I was meant to be She turned to Shivaay at the second half of her sentence.

"Does it mean...we are all set for a wedding in the family finally? Rudra asked excitedly.

Shivaay smiled, slipping his hand into Anika's.

"He hasn't asked me yet! Anika pulled back her hand and crossed her arms looking away.

"Kya Bhaiya! the trio looked at Shivaay irritated.

"Aye. You guys just interrupted. I was going to. He explained.

"Thank God! whispered Omkara in relief.

Before Anika knew he was in his knees before her, holding her hand.

"I know I have been a jerk. I know I am an idiot. I know I am not the best match perhaps...But I have always loved you and only you Anika...are you willing to forgive me for everything I did in the past and ... will you Marry Me Anika?

Tears flowing once again she looked at him with love. Nodding she made him rise. "I will! He kissed her forehead and pulled her for a hug. Her head resting close to his heart, listening to every beat which was hers. The others clapped.

"Great, we have work to do! Rudra declared excitedly. Anika smiled.

"Guys, Wedding in the house! Let's start the preparations. Rudra pulled Mahi out excitedly.

Just when Om was about to leave the couple and follow Mahi and Rudra's trail. He was stopped by Shivaay's voice.

He turned to the couple.

"Thank You! The couple said in unison.

Om smiled with moist eyes, gulping hard. He finally spoke-

"Ishq Intehaan Leta Hai Zaroor,

Thode Aasoon Thoda Dard Deta Hai Zaroor,

Ibaadat Samaj Kar Karte Rehena Isse,

Zindagi Ko Mukammal Yeh Karta Hai, Huzoor!

Smiling he turned to leave. Those droplets he had held in his eyes, fell off. He looked up, as he walked. She was right, Thoda saa jhooth kisi ki zindagi sawaar skata hai!
If only he had believed in those words back then.

Shivaay looked at Anika as Om disappeared. She looked back at him. They both understood the value of what they had! Just looks were enough to talk.


Because, eyes never lie.


Their eyes were enough to say,

I Love You..


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@Anya @Poorvi

Hope you both liked it. I had to keep the essence of both your parts, I hopefully did, and give a turn...which I did!

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Hopefully all you lovely readers enjoyed this conclusion.😳

Would love to hear from you...

Extremely sorry if you were all expecting a heart-breaking end.

But, the twist and turn is all about unexpected surprises, so...😳


Edited by Khidki - 7 years ago

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