T & T Tales! (Shivika) The Love That Stayed-Completed - Page 4

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Posted: 7 years ago
#31

Thank you so much for commenting, dear 😃😃
I am really happy to know that you found this intriguing.😳😳

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Posted: 7 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: spankinew

Hey Poorvika...

Interesting start...
Shivaay's clearly regrets what he did to annika all those years ago.. and repents...but is shocked to see anything but love in her eyes..
Looking forward to the next update
Loved it dear.

Amrutha


Hey Amrutha😛😛,

Thank you so much for appreciating my work ,dear.😳😳
I am glad that you found the start interesting. 😛😛
Yeaahhh... he does regret what he did. Annika is there for revenge, love is something which is yet to be explored out. And the Anya has done that by updating the next part. 😃😃
I hope you like that part too because I loved it.😳😳
Thanks a lot again for loving it dear.😊😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#33
Partner 🤗

You gave it a beautiful touch. This justified Shivaay's actions very well.

OmRu's interaction with Anika was great 😆 And of course, Shivaay's condition and Anika facing the truth was amazing. I am so excited for what we can have next :D

P.S. Cheers to the fact that Shivaay knew Anika is here to destroy him and yet he let it be. Because he feels it's all his faults😭
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Posted: 7 years ago
#34
OMG...This is how a twist and turn tales should be...
The way you taken the story from the first part to now... its superb yar...I just loved this... your emotional updates are my one of the favorites anya... Feeling sad for shivika...I really hope they survives it... sab next writer ki haath mein hai... bas ek hi dua hai...let him write a happy ending...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#35
Omg! Such a sad twist😭
The entire scene was so heartfelt. With OmRu in picture now.
This is so heartbreaking, the scene of him unconscious in her lap stole it away for me.
😭
Loved how you continued and gave a still deeper menaingbto his eyes never lied. That stood out for me. "Dil pe thaa kar ke laga!"

Let's see how writer three concludes this.😭
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Posted: 7 years ago
#36
It was amazing beautiful emotional and bliss to read
Nd u did justification Wythenshawe Poorvika's story
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Posted: 7 years ago
#37
I am loving these twist and turn tales. This is amazing and we get best of al the worlds.

This story is amazing with a totally different angle. Very emotional but loved it.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#38
Anya,
The second part of the story is beautifully written... I have never imagined that you would take this route to the happenings with Shivika though it does completely justify what you have written about what happened years back with them as written by Poorvika...

But, why was he searching for her from 2 yrs ? Whatever happened was way back during their school/college...is it bcoz he needed her for his company to be saved ?
And in the first part too its said that she has been trying to get some way to destroy his already crumbling empire...

but what you have written is so emotional and heart breaking...very well written and I am eagerly waiting for the final update..

-Rohini
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Posted: 7 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

wow so he had hurt her feelings once and now she is back to get back to him...can't wait to see wat is going to happen


Thanks a lot for commenting, dear.😳😳
Exactly , she is there for revenge. But, he still loves her. 😛😛
I hope you like the second part too.😃😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: farinaks

Poorvika

Gsl u hzve amazing writing skills
U know hw to bind ur reader till end
Im looking forward to the nxt part frm another writer
Amazing ne awesome
What a brilliant RAITA YOU FALLOED
Tq fr pm


Thank you so much for appreciating my writing skills, Fari.😳😳
I am really glad to know that this piece was able to keep you hooked till the end.😃😃
The second part is updated and I saw you comment for that too.😉😉
Thanks a lot again for your kind words about this part, dear. 😛😛
I am so happy that you liked my Phailaya Hua Raaita.😆😆

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