Rikara SS- Mine to break, mine to heal *Dark* Chap5 pg26 UPDATED!! - Page 21

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Posted: 7 years ago
Your Omkara is breaking my heart in ways I cannot completely put into words. His intensity and passion combined with his at this stage confusing sense of self-worth alongside his obsession with Gauri is a remedy for complexities that make reading about him so enjoyable. Poor Gauri is stuck in the middle but trying to do the right thing. When he hurts her in his own despair then regains himself for her sake, I see that as her being the light pulling him out of his darkness - as a warm hand of sanity to pull him out of his own madness. Theirs is no conventional story and I love the way you're telling it.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Great update. I kinda feel bad for Omkara here, but in the end Gauri is definitely gonna be there for him.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Deaaar Get well soon❤️
And coming to the Update I loved it
It was nice that Gauri managed to take care of both brothers.
Both are hurt in different ways yet there is one pain they share: Heartbreak.
Both Love Gauri and They want to be loved by her.
I was almost crying when Om turned the room into a mess and sat there waiting for Gauri to come to him( He was shattered because I think he believes that she didn't care about whether he would return or not but rather be interested in Rudy) and it broke my heart the way he sat their like a little child, hopelessly blaming himself. Thinking that he doesn't deserve love.

That was so beautifully written and how Gauri tried to stop him and got hurt... damn my heart was breaking once again when he realized what happened and despite his bruises and wounds wanted to take care of her.


I simply have no words for the emotional feelings you have caused in me


Also I really can't wait what will happen next. I hope we get Gauri visiting Om in his Studio. I want her to see the real Om- the Artistic Om. A nice version of himself- not the one that blackmailed her.

I hope they will get to talk soon so Gauri can see if she can give him what he needs.

Also Rudra needs to come clean ( with what ever he did- in the chapter before it seemed like he did a mistake and he told om that he was sorry for that)

I want Gauri to see both of them in different lights to slowly understand who she can see herself having a future with.

But I know you will manage to surprise us, to keep us hooked as always Rex

❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
He is an intense soul ...passionate,complex,obsessed and broken.. and he snatched his angel for the little comfort he desperately needed. He is not bad but he is not a saint either.. loved ur Om:)and Gauri..she is all that he needs to heal...can't wait for future installments:)awesome job!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
You finally updated after so long. Thank you so much.
I really enjoyed this chapter. Looking forward to more.
I hope you get well soon. Take care of yourself.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Angst on its peak. My heart goes for this man.
Update soon :)

Love
- Harshada
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Posted: 7 years ago
Atlast you updated.
Love this mad Om.
Plz give next update very soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Pau91

Are you gonna unfold what happened between Om and Rudy? why is their relation so damaged? i would love to see more of discussion between Om and Gauri...this chap was superb,great job👏 waiting for the next part

Thank you so much! ❤️
I am afraid if there is much to reveal about Omkara and Rudra's past..but ill try to make ther relationship more clear in upcoming updates :D
Ill also try to add more conversations betweeen gauri and Om..i guess they are very needed.

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Posted: 7 years ago
Read the update and loved it
Continue soon

Eager to see RiKara equation now
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey Rex..
Hope you're fine now..get well soon, darling...
I loved this chapter..
Gauri is pissed off between these two brothers..I feel bad for her...
She felt hurt to see Rudy in a injured state..it's obvious as she loves him..but she's also concerned for Om...
I loved how she defended him before Rudy..
There's much more to get unfolded in Omkara and Rudy's relation..
My Omie..I think he was hurt to see her care and love for Rudy..maybe that's why he reacted..he felt guilty and was punishing himself...
I think they should interact more with each other..can we have a convo..??
Will be waiting for the next chappy..jaldi jaldi thik ho jao...
Edited by tasnimrodela - 7 years ago

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