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Posted: 7 years ago

Epilogue

Gauri let the hot water from the shower soothe her senses. It had been a long week. Gauri was glad that Shivaay and Anika's wedding was finally done and she could finally relax. Gauri was enjoying the shower so much that she didn't hear the door lock behind her. It was only when she felt his arms snake over her stomach that she realised she had company.

Om,' Gauri smiled with her eyes closed. Yes love?' Om said kissing her shoulder. Gauri let herself enjoy the sensations. She knew she needed it. Suddenly, out of the corner of her eyes she saw two tiny hands under the bathroom door.

Garv?' Hearing that, Omkara's eyes opened in a flash and followed the direction Gauri was looking in. If you ignore him, he'll go away,' Omkara said quietly but he knew Gauri would do anything but ignore him. Shut up. That's our son you're talking about,' Gauri lightly smacked him across his chest. She quickly got dressed and went to tend to their toddler.

Omkara quickly wrapped a towel around his waist and followed her. Garv? How did you get out of your cot?' Gauri asked, picking him up and placing him on the bed. Garv spoke in his baby language. That's not fair Gauri,' Omkara stood with his arms across his chest. I thought we would get some privacy after moving out of Oberoi mansion but meri to kismat hi kharab hai.' (My luck's bad)

Gauri put the baby down and came closer to Om. She stood on her tiptoes and seductively whispered in his ear, Once I put this one to bed, We can finish what we started Mr. Oberoi.' Om looked satisfied, I'll be waiting,' he said with a glint in his eye.

Babaji ki prem wali booti,' Rudra said stirring a glass of milk. He quietly left it in Shivaay and Anika's room while the couple were downstairs completing some ritual.

When all the rituals were done, he slipped into his room. Rudra tried to find his wife in the dim lighting when he felt her arms snaking across his stomach. I hope you saved some of that booti for us.' Rudra smiled and in flash, turned around and pinned Saumya to the wall. My dear wifey, I don't need no booti. Mere liye tum hi kaafi ho,' (You are enough for me) he said nuzzling his nose in the crook of her neck.

That's all folks. Hope you enjoyed reading this much as I enjoyed writing it. Thank you for the likes and comments. It really meant a lot to me.

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Posted: 7 years ago

Prologue

Gauri ye kuch sareeyan hai, inme se jo tujhe pasand aaye woh tu rakh le aur shaadi ke functions mein yeh hi pehen na,' (Gauri here are some sarees. Keep whichever ones you like and wear these for the wedding functions) Kalyani Devi lovingly ran her hand over Gauri's head. Gauri hesitated, Bohot sundar hai Dadi par ye hum kaise rakh le?' (They are very pretty but how can I keep them?. Dadi bhi kehti ho aur meri baat bhi nahi maanti ho' (You call me Dadi and you don't listen to me) Dadi pouted. Sarry Dadi,' Gauri said, holding her ears. Ye hui na baat,' (Now that's the spirit) Dadi smiled and kissed Gauri's forehead. Hum abhi baujaai ko dikha kar aate hai,' (I will show these to Anika) Gauri sprang to her feet and made her way towards Anika's room.

Om who had witnessed this entire scene, waited for Gauri to leave before he approached Dadi. Dadi aap Gauri ke doosri shaadi kaise kara sakti hai?' (Dadi how can you agree for Gauri's remarriage?)


So guys many of you asked me to carry on writing so this is just a little something I wrote (for a different SS of course).

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Posted: 7 years ago
THANK YOU :D so so much for that sweet Epilogue
I am happy that Shivaay and Anika found their happy ending
loved MommyRi- DaddyKara ❤️
despite being parents they are still naughty and deeply in love

Lovely written

And Rudra of course truly knows how to love his wife😉
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: StarryStarryNyt

Prologue

Gauri ye kuch sareeyan hai, inme se jo tujhe pasand aaye woh tu rakh le aur shaadi ke functions mein yeh hi pehen na,' (Gauri here are some sarees. Keep whichever ones you like and wear these for the wedding functions) Kalyani Devi lovingly ran her hand over Gauri's head. Gauri hesitated, Bohot sundar hai Dadi par ye hum kaise rakh le?' (They are very pretty but how can I keep them?. Dadi bhi kehti ho aur meri baat bhi nahi maanti ho' (You call me Dadi and you don't listen to me) Dadi pouted. Sarry Dadi,' Gauri said, holding her ears. Ye hui na baat,' (Now that's the spirit) Dadi smiled and kissed Gauri's forehead. Hum abhi baujaai ko dikha kar aate hai,' (I will show these to Anika) Gauri sprang to her feet and made her way towards Anika's room.

Om who had witnessed this entire scene, waited for Gauri to leave before he approached Dadi. Dadi aap Gauri ke doosri shaadi kaise kara sakti hai?' (Dadi how can you agree for Gauri's remarriage?)


So guys many of you asked me to carry on writing so this is just a little something I wrote (for a different SS of course).




Oh hell yes!! The plot sounds very very interesting
Would love to know what happens next
pls continue 👏👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
epilogue
Om-Ri with their little son.
They are not in the OM , privacy, ahh haa ... naughty Om😆...

Finally Shivay-anika got married- that's nice

and Rudra and saumya romance...

Nicely written dear...

Prologue
Seems like plot is very interesting... as previous one
Ohh! Gauri's remarriage...😒 not with Om
What happened to them...
Gauri's first marriage was with Om???

Remarraige is Dadi's plan????? hope sooo
Pls update soon

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

THANK YOU :D so so much for that sweet Epilogue

I am happy that Shivaay and Anika found their happy ending
loved MommyRi- DaddyKara❤️
despite being parents they are still naughty and deeply in love

Lovely written

And Rudra of course truly knows how to love his wife😉



It's my pleasure lovely. I couldn't leave my readers guessing what happened to them.

Ah yes. These cutie pies. If anything, they are more in love than ever.

Finally Rudra knows what the booti is for lol. 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm





Oh hell yes!! The plot sounds very very interesting
Would love to know what happens next
pls continue👏👏



Thank you. You guys motivated me to write!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: priyadil

epilogue

Om-Ri with their little son.
They are not in the OM , privacy, ahh haa ... naughty Om😆...

Finally Shivay-anika got married- that's nice

and Rudra and saumya romance...

Nicely written dear...

Prologue
Seems like plot is very interesting... as previous one
Ohh! Gauri's remarriage...😒not with Om
What happened to them...
Gauri's first marriage was with Om???

Remarraige is Dadi's plan????? hope sooo
Pls update soon



Yes they moved out. Too much drama happens in that house lol.

I wanted to include all of them in this update.

Prologue:
It's basically based on IB storyline when Om repeatedly asks her to leave. You can slot it wherever you want.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Epilogue
It's awesome to see RiKara with their son

Yaar yeh O bhi na... He always wants Gauri with him can't even share her with his son...

I don't think Shivay needs babaji ka booti... Considering how sensitive Shivay is to all this weired things , I guess he will only end up vomiting whole night... Was that Rudy's plan?


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Posted: 7 years ago
Prologue
Plot already promises we ll get a jealous om and I already love it

So, is it gonna be on the same story line as show?

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